|Reviews for Love Me Like You Mean It|
| LunaLightt chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
*melts* I think I just died, this is amazing!
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
| Mochiiko chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
*snif* yes! yay! she loved him back! (in the end)
| Konoha's White Fang chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
That was simply amazing...Lavi is just something else...he truly loves and only cares about her. I can't put my feelings into words, because this fic is totally something else.
| MyahLuffrel chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Aw! This was so sweet and good! Thabk you for making a -man Fanfiction!
| Puru-purin chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
i found myself reading another your story without knowing!
That only means you're that GREAT!
| Lollixx chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Wah! so true! i feel this is really part of the manga hahaha
| RoyxRizaFan chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I loved this story! I thought it was very sad, but then it ended happily for my dear Lavi LOL Please keep writing LavixLenalee fanfiction!
| Lechu chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
So touching! ç_ç Lovely!
| silverfire113 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
very cute :) loved it
| DearJournal chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I loved it TT
| ritachi chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I don't know why no one else reviewed, but I'll try to do my best to give you my full opinion on this story.
Firstly, let's get through the technicalities. One: please separate dialogue (spoken by different people) into separate lines. It's hard to understand who's talking when you clump them together into one paragraph. Two: near the end of the fic, you switched from third to first person, and I was thinking "Huh?" It was weird, and I think that part was something you wanted to italicize?
Other than that, I thought the story was pretty good. I'm not a fan of Lavi x Lenalee (I can only see her with Kanda or Allen), but I thought this was a very bittersweet story. The summary with Lavi's line of only wishing to love her and that being enough was very heartbreaking. But I felt you could've taken this story a bit further. The beginning started out nice and clear and melodious, but as you went on, the entire story kind of went murky and unclear. I was thinking, "What is it that you want to tell me?" Is it that Lavi and Lenalee can be together in the end one day? Or is that she is continuing to use Lavi as a means of protecting her fragile spirit and soul after Allen "died"?
Just make it a bit clearer next time, and I think you'd make a very nicely written Lavi x Lenalee story. Oh, and for the record, when Lavi came to the Order and saw Lenalee grieving for her fallen comrades, patched up in layers of bandages, her hair was down, not upheld in ponytails. Sorry, just one of my peeves for people writing in canon.