Reviews for On the Wrong Foot
ShadowTeir chapter 21 . 2/5
This has been a great story and I absolutely loved it.
chocolateisbrown5 chapter 21 . 11/26/2014
Loved it. This is actually my second time reading this! Wow
Angel Fantasy chapter 19 . 11/18/2014
Wait, when did Karin get pregnant exactly? I don't remember reading any passage where they actually tumble into bed to mate, so did she have them as a virgin, via stained boxers due to a morning erection? This is quite perplexing.

Nevertheless, the triplet girls are simply adorable. And I now, by what I,ve read today, that they're all gonna have daddy warped around their little fingers.
Cailtin chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Hey ( Again) This story is by far my favourite and I will always love this story ( and the arranged marriage ooooo and the triplets ) no story can replace this is story is the first in my top five along with Journey to the east, Spawn of Satan and etc ))
LisayaTomago chapter 21 . 8/29/2014
I really liked this story, even though the romantic progression was a bit... weird? sudden? Not so sure. LOVED the HITSUKARIN! :D SQUEE!
impeasant chapter 21 . 5/24/2014
wow... this was really fun to read and is an amazing and fun Hitsukarin fanfic! I really enjoyed reading this. (*u*)
Also, thank you for creating such amazing fanfic. Again, for the second time, it was really fun reading this! :D
bitternessbitesback chapter 21 . 1/27/2014
This was an amazing story and I couldn't take my eyes off it for a second. You are a great writer and I enjoyed reading this. I love your stories. Thanks for reading! -
kellyo441bleachfav chapter 21 . 1/25/2014
Aww. It was romaticly strange. By the say I'm writing a short noval called french tulip feel free to check it out
kellyo441bleachfav chapter 16 . 1/25/2014
It was fine in bleach she is actully a bit annoying
elementgod1 chapter 21 . 1/7/2014
OH MY god your are like the Ichigo of writing. A master at story telling I've read many pieces of fanfiction but truth be told you are you that has won the tittle of my top pick for the art of storytelling master. my opinion probable doesn't amount for much but that is my opinion you amazing and write more
eurielle chapter 21 . 1/1/2014
its so fun to read cute.
Didd23 chapter 19 . 12/15/2013
if it wasn't almost 11 on a school night i'd continue reading
Didd23 chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
i've got to say; the latter half was completely unexpected, heart rending, and made me hate aizen even more than i already do
chibi313 chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
Toshiro and Karin's arguments are funny!
chibi313 chapter 7 . 7/14/2013
huh I have to agree with Karin with this argument
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