|Reviews for Midnight of the Heart|
| RadiantBeam chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
COUNT ME IN, BABY!
Seriously, if the series didn't go one way those three were bound to end up together at some point. And from reading this chapter, especially the Yuuno/Fate interaction, I do think the two of them are capable of making it work. Of course, whether or not they do all depends on you, doesn't it?
Still, that's a pretty sweet looking family Vivio's got right now. Two mamas and a papa.
And Vivio as a hedgehog? This I've GOT to see. Maybe she should try changing into a ferret...
Update soon, please!
| Kode Dekka chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
so far awesome and Nanoha harem? (Ok maybe I should lay off the school days for a bit XD)
| SpicyTofu chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
of all the...POLYGAMY? I...I...dont know whether to laugh or cry at this point. I did not see that one coming. you've eaten my soul... .
| SpicyTofu chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
damn...you have no idea how much I've been waiting for some Fate-Nanoha-Yuuno angst!
Ahh, no I'm dying cause I really wanna know what happens.I really didn't see the, "call Yuuno's name" coming, dang it! ANGST Masterfully written btw, I'll be biting my nails to the nub until you update xd!
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
...Oh, is that all it was, Fate?
She assumes she's second in Nanoha's heart, but was she? It probably never occurred to her that Nanoha might be calling out for Yuuno because he wasn't there with the TWO of them. Why call out for Fate when Fate isn't the one missing from the bed?
Now, if Nanoha had a habit of crying out Yuuno's name in a moment of passion, then it would be a different story. But I rather suspect that she has occassionally had a habit of the opposite in her time with Yuuno.
I wonder how big the pink blast of doom will have to be to clear things up this time? And will there be a need for green chains?, because I've missed Yuuno's presence on the battlefield.
Anyway, I'm delighted to see you contributing to this fandom as well, Dezo. And I encourage my fellow readers to check out Dezo's other works - especially his GrimGrimoire fics, if girl/girl is what your particular draw.
| RadiantBeam chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I've got to put you on my Favorites list. To date, I'm falling madly in love with everything you write for the fandoms I like.
On that note, you just keep breaking my heart, don't you? I liked Yuuno/Nanoha AND Fate/Nanoha, to be honest, but in the end NanoFate won out... and I hate to see them both hurting as much as they obviously are. But I have faith in you! Even if right now everything is really heartbreaking to read, I still believe you can turn it around!
... You CAN turn it around, right? Please?
I'll keep an eye out for KnS, too. And this is going on my Favorites. .
| deymian chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
PLS DONT MAKE THIS A ONESHOT! i beg of you!
it has a good plot and i will be waiting patiently for the next chapter...that means ill sit in a corner and wait for your update while rocking back and forth...
Im kidding ;D... but please update:P
| ailissin chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
-Ouch-. That ending was -harsh-. This isn't a one-shot right? There's more...RIGHT? D:
| ShoujoGirl chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
First of all welcome to Nanoha fanfic world!
We have a few angst writers.
This is a good start and I can't wait the next chapter!
Kudos to you!
| Kode Dekka chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
that was epic keep it up.
| ToumaSan chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I love this fic...I also love your KnM fic. Keep going! I need to know what happens! T-T I'll give you a cookie if ya update? XD
| NanoFate.us chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I was reluctantly to reading this fic since you added “some yuunoha” in the description, but I gave it I try since it was NanoFate and I like angst if it finally come out to a good final.
I don’t know if I’m rejecting reading this first chapter, it’s very well written and it’s good to have an author like you around here, so congratulations for achieving something this good in your first try in Nanoha’s section. But the “Yuuno-papa” thing and the last quote about Nanoha calling Yuuno’s name just broke my heart. Does it mean that Nanoha doesn’t really love her Fate-chan? ;_; I hope I’m wrong, and I hope that somehow you can bring us a good end to Nanoha and Fate. Our favorite blonde is suffering too much, I don’t think I would able to stand a bad end for them considering that this chapter already broke my heart ;_;… but don’t misunderstand me, I love angst, but when it comes to NanoFate I don’t like bad end too much, or at least I don’t like them when it’s something like “I love someone else”, especially when it comes to this genre… So I wonder if it should be better if I stop reading this fic now…?
You shouldn’t have ended this chapter in this part… update soon please ;_;
Cuídate y sigue sonriendo )
| Arkeus chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Leftovers from Yuuno the ferret?
| Mysteric chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Stupid, stupid Nanoha! What she'd done to Fate? I really want to slap her xDD
And Fate! how can you still love her so much? i-i
At first, I liked the way Yuuno was, but now.. I think I hate him. x.x!
I'll be waiting the next chap!