|Reviews for Part of Their World|
| glasgowgirl chapter 16 . 6/22/2010
Cute story, well done! )...x
| Bloody Mononoke chapter 17 . 7/12/2009
i liked it over all! but it was a bit way to fast.
well, i guess you planned to do it that way?
good story though.
| ANGELOFTHEBLACKROSES chapter 17 . 12/17/2008
hm...boring ending..but then again all ending are boring. lol.
| preetynpink123 chapter 17 . 12/2/2008
i ussually don't like jacob but now - i still hate him but i liked the story alot :D - preetynpink123
| cahrshasas chapter 9 . 12/2/2008
this is a very good story! the only thing i would change would be the vulgar language. and i do have a couple of questions:
1. why did jacob and haley rush everythig? i mean he already said that he loved her!
2. why is haley so content with everything that is happening? i mean don't get me wrong! i love this story! but i was wondering..so
| cahrshasas chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
why do the vampires have fangs?
| 1PhantomPhreak8 chapter 13 . 11/6/2008
Ok When you transfer places you need to make it more apparent. Dosnt have to be like She went to the mall..But something that your readers know ok so they left..Good Chap!
| Geason chapter 12 . 10/31/2008
how could you!
you left it at a cliffy
you are a very evil person (
so he's going to propose right?
anyway update soon!
| 1PhantomPhreak8 chapter 12 . 10/31/2008
Holly Sh*t! ALREADY? DANG! NICE! MORE MORE MORE MORE
| Geason chapter 11 . 10/30/2008
ah no BAD CLIFFY! lol that was mean to give us a cliffy like that ( anyway.. update soon!
| DustyDreamer chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Ou that was really cool. Can't wait to read on...
| ANGELOFTHEBLACKROSES chapter 10 . 10/19/2008
| Geason chapter 10 . 10/18/2008
oh em gee! great chappy! your story really is one of the best I've read on here! update soon
| ANGELOFTHEBLACKROSES chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
cool! awesome! this is soo cool. update soon.
| Geason chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
I absolutly love this story! you are an amazing author! i was surprised at the whole haley being a wolf thing lol but y is she white shouldn't she be the color of her hair? oh well! update soon!