Reviews for Code Red
xXxShiningDarknessxXx chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
I loved this story! I hate the girl soooooo much that it's funny to read those things happen to her! Good Job!
Nakeyta Owens chapter 3 . 3/6/2009
WOHO! I HATE THE MARY-SUES/MORTY-STUS! THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH! YOU ARE GOD!
Rolletti chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
Hi, sorry but I just had to comment on this GREAT JOB!

Rolletti
James Birdsong chapter 2 . 11/6/2008
Meh. *applaud the two chapters anyhow*
LiRA chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
Hahaha, nice! I hate Mary Sues. This fic is funny. It's like 101 ways to kill a Mary Sue, Peter Pan edition.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to a good giggle.
Doctor Madwoman chapter 2 . 10/14/2008
I...I love you, Rosa. Have I told you that? Yeah...cuz it's true.

THANK YOU.
Rolletti chapter 2 . 10/3/2008
Great story, and too funny. I like how Wendy never really have to say anything and it all works out in her favor. LOL

Rolletti
DreamMakersMagic chapter 2 . 9/30/2008
i love it lol ur hilarious
DreamMakersMagic chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
lol thats hilarious yay no more mary sueness
Purple Shamrock 17 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
This was great! I really enjoyed it!

I'm glad you included Wendy and that she, as always was the sensible one and I recognized that cake scene from the book! Nice reference!

The last line was particully sweet, very Barriesque, if I may say so.
Lita of Jupiter chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
how fun!

and of course Peter had to have the last word!

D
Rolletti chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Hi Rosa,

I loved this short chapter of your story. Why do you question the humor? I thought it was quite funny. Sometimes it's nice to stear away from the mainstream just to take a breather so you can come back refreshed. I like it and wish to see more of this kind of writing from you. Only the brave can do it and you did.

"Peter-poo" Oh I cracked up first thing with this line and (freckle-free, unlike others she could name), rosebud mouth (with ten hidden kisses), TEN KISSES! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Now that's hilarious.

“You see!” Peter cried and wagged a disapproving finger at his band. “Never, ever start eating before your Captain does. Or else I will banish you forever like I did Kitty!”

Peter taking credit for even this is just too funny. I love it, I really do and again I hope to see more.

Chow babe,

Rolletti
kasmira36 chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Sorry but I gotta say, this story is not my type as you know I'm extremely a Peter/Wendy lover. After waiting for you new story for a long while, this one is quite disappointing.

Apologize for my offending review. And, do wish to see a new Peter/Wendy soon.