Reviews for Try
LadyDuchess82 chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
Love the line "don't stop trying " it must be so difficult for them to keep denying their feelings. Great story!
tengland2 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
If they were the only two people, no obligations, no interruptions. Nicely done.
Kate Andromeda chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Very bitter sweet, but why cant she say something more positive. ;) Thanks for this other view on this scene. Love it.
beMMADfabulous chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
LOVED IT! I really adore your take on it. This was beautifully written, and the ending was wonderful. Great job! D
Captain Weirdo chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Like it? LOVED it!
Clarisse Renaldi chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
“Call me your lover then,” That was hilarious...:-)

It was a bit sad, but hope aslo appears, and I loved her last line: “Don’t stop trying.”

I think that was in Clarisse's head during those 5 years.:-)
Obsidian Storm chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
aww... that was saucy and cute at the same time lol. I loved it!
tabby-fanny chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
So cute. Thanks for this little story. It's lovely. This scene was one of the best in the first movie. It's a shame that so many scenes between Clarisse and Joseph were cut out of the movies. They aren't even on the dvd's. So thanks again for writing such a wonderful story about them,

yours tabby-fanny
Zsulie chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
WOW! It was very very sensual, if I may say! I liked it very much! What about a sequel?
completewithtypos chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
This is wonderful, I'm so glad you posted! I haven't read PD in so long, but this is just what I needed tonight! Thank you! *L
amieemb chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
It's about time! You really need to write more! This was amazing and beautiful! Please do something else soon!
aserene chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
aww that was beautiful! Well done my friend! Well done!