Reviews for Yar
justpasserby chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
That was just truly divine, thank you so much.
The characters were incredibly likethe game and it just added that touch of sensitivity and magic that makes a really beautiful fic.

(there might be some poor choice of words, English is bit my mothertongue :-P)
MarMima chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Man,I can't believe I forgot about this story,its so beautiful!I'm glad I found it again.
Thank you for writing this...its the best Lloyd x Zelos fic I've read yet :D!
Falcon's-Fang chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Wow. I am at a loss for word except for WOW! This was amazing! I've been reading it nonstop and was completely engrossed in it. It is by far the best Fanfiction I have ever read!
green ninja93 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Most likely the best Zelos/Lloyd fic I have ever read, this has so many different levels of complexity and stays true to so many of the characters. I love this fic and I love the pairing great job on an awsome piece of work XD
The Cold Mage chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I-I have nothing to say to express how much i adore this.
KTsukiko chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
dear HeartofShou:

I think I love you. Bless you forever for writing this beauty.
Chang-Tong chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Your beta was... IS right: this story IS epic! 8D

I really love how you took time in writing out and describing every part of Lloyd and Zelos' feelings for each other: instead of jumping right into the matter and having Zelos go "oh, I totally like him" despite his canonical personality, especially about women. Thanks for the obvious time and effort you put into this, as it beared some very nice and tasty fruits. XDDD It's so heartfelt...
theatrelove123 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. Truly phenomenal writing, which not something you find often on this site! Seriously, this story is one in a million. I wholeheartedly enjoyed it all. Thank you!
Liberius chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Hmm. I don't generally read yaoi, but this story is adorable. Well done.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
Now I have a little piece of warmth tucked into my heart to last me for the rest of the day, thanks!
Mizu Hoseki chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
I'd say this was long!

took me a couple hours to read with about 6 inbetween cause I had to stop and go to work XD;


very cute _

-snaps pics of the two kissing-

Shining Ducky chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Pure win. Thank you.
xxFraise chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Words cannot describe how much I loved this fic. I don't care if it was written over a year ago, this is probably the best ToS fic I've read, and I'd be dammed if I didn't tell you that.

Great job.
Notaveryaffablerabbit chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
That's... Really touching. I love this story and I now feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you.
Renn chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Wow. Words fail me. If I dared, I'd fill this review box with synonyms of the word "amazing". And I'd even make up some to make the list longer. The insight into Zelos' feelings was simply moving. And every other character as well - and thank you for not simply dismissing Colette as a bubbly and innocent chosen! Even your Lloyd was...damn, I'm gonna say it again but hey, can't help it! AMAZING! This is a definite favourite, be it in the ToS category, or in the fanfiction world in general. You did a wonderful job, and I really wish there were more masterworks like that out there!
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