|Reviews for Master and Expert|
| HodgePodge97 chapter 6 . 6/15/2013
I find it creepy that Ichigo is talking to Yoruichi like that while she's in cat form. That man voice would be really ackward. Urahara is still as funny as ever.
| HodgePodge97 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Urahara always knows best.
| HodgePodge97 chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
And things start getting complicated...
| HodgePodge97 chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
Yoruichi is seducing our innocent Ichigo. And Isshin, really? Giving your son condoms.
| HodgePodge97 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Is Yoruichi a stalker? Ha ha ha! Good so far, so I'm going to read the rest tomarrow.
| LoverIndia chapter 18 . 4/22/2013
Just a quick point. Yoruichi was the captain of 2nd division 100 years ago. And that makes her more than hundred years older than him.
But the story is ok
| Yu Narukami P4 chapter 18 . 2/24/2013
I didn't care if Yoruichi is out of character. It's your story, feel free to do anything you wish.
I honestly can't wait for the sequel :)
please PM me if you decide to do the sequel. :)
| onlytoask chapter 18 . 1/23/2013
Ok story. Glad I finished it.
| SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei chapter 13 . 1/15/2013
Yoruichi vs. Gin wouldn't be nearly so one-sided. Gin would win, but not without severe injury to his person.
| SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei chapter 12 . 1/15/2013
*eyetwitch* Grimmkitty dead? Someone must pay...! No...must not attack author...Must stay force the otherwise excellent story. I'm sorry, Grimmjow was my fav character.
Yes, Gin is stronger than Grimmjow.
| SayoShihoinXKohAyamerei chapter 6 . 1/15/2013
Actually Ulquiorra IS a Vasto Lorde.
| onlytoask chapter 11 . 1/13/2013
I don't really like the way you write.
| onlytoask chapter 10 . 1/13/2013
I didn't like this chapter. It was way to rushed. It was also very... awkward. That's not really the perfect word for it, but it fits well enough. I think it's just impossible to write an excellent IchigoxYoruichi romance. If you don't change the characters it doesn't quite seem to fit no matter how you write it.
| onlytoask chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
I don't want to nit pick, but aren't they running not jogging?
| onlytoask chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
Ichigo and Yoruichi seem out of character. It doesn't seem like either of them would act the way they are.