|Reviews for I don't believe Mario's last name is Mario part 2|
| Kincin The Great chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
SEGALI THERE REAL NAME IS SEGALI
| Walkazo chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
The first scene was forced; in the second, the alphabetical order's messed up (Todd comes after Mario, and Luigi should be called first, though I know that would mess up your joke); and the third scene is just like the bank scene from one of your earlier stories.
Also, you might try underlining of bolding the scene titles, to make things easier to follow (this applies to your earlier works too).