|Reviews for Some Like it Schmot|
| Some1Else chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
Well, you've done it again. The ease with which Speedy adjusted to being a woman is amusing enough, but how he does so while still being kept in character is admirable. Usually you do this quite well, but somehow everything in this story seems a lot stronger, which makes it really shine as one of your better entries in this area. The interactions, no matter how absurd, seem so true to the show. Al and Big Cheese talking so openly with each other when the Big Cheese comes back from vacation and cancels all the assumptions Al had about the self defense school is a notable example.
There's some really great one-liner's in this story as well. Speedy suspecting sexism in Al's plan to send Francine and Polly to the camp was great. The scene where all the girls introduce themselves on the bus was amusing. Prudence. Good one. The scene where Lucille learns to channel her anger was a real surprise. If only she would have taken it seriously. That bit where Speedy throws his boobs at Bad Bird was great. You seem to have spent half of the story building that up through all those boob jokes and it really pays off in the end. I also enjoyed the slumber party, skirts being blown, and particularly when Speedy tries to eat soap.
Overall, this was a very entertaining read. Refreshing, even.
| CanaryDavid chapter 4 . 12/17/2008
What a great way to end a brilliant funny story.
| Drucilla Black chapter 4 . 12/16/2008
hahaha a very funny story. Hope you write another one soon!
| CanaryDavid chapter 3 . 11/26/2008
Loved the in-joke "trampy clothing" lol
Keep it up!
| merigirl chapter 2 . 11/19/2008
Parody of 'Some Like It Hot'? Cute! Please say you're going to give Guido the Jack Lemmon role, PLEASE! Let the womanizer get his in the end, please!
| Drucilla Black chapter 2 . 10/18/2008
Hahahaha this story is hilarious. Please update again soon!
| CanaryDavid chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Slumber party scene was fantastic
| Drucilla Black chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Hahaha love this cheeky little parody. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| CanaryDavid chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
You haven't lost your touch and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.