Reviews for ToLoveRu Crimson Darkness
guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
holy crap this is amazing
Enigma of Bishieness chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Wow, welcome back to writing, dude. I don't follow To Love Ru, but it's great to have you back in the community anyhow.

Good luck with the fic!
dark drow chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
wow O.O such a dark note and start to a to love-ru fic :P still very nice. i have to say im captivated :D, great detail on fight scenes and environment, i felt i was there to see it all :P, overall writing seems to be good but i saw a couple of spelling errors nothing to big that a little spit shine cant fix, other then that the only true constructive critism i may give you is to just continue to write, the more you write the better you will get :3, and on that note i will wait forever and a day just to see the next chapter of your fic :D, please take care till then