Reviews for Lady Of The Knight
Alejandra111 chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
hmmhmmhmm chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
This story is really great- you're an amazing author! I like that you're not afraid to take a few artistic liberties when discussing NY. Some people forget about the *fiction* part of fanfic. Great job so far! :)
PurdueLiz chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
This was nice. Getting to know everyone. I'm glad that Rose is approachable here. So sad that she might have seen Jacob, but thrilled Edward said he'd help her find him.

But Bella, oh Bella, this... "I will not be a burden on someone else again. Jessica’s words rang in my ear. ‘Maybe now you’ll move out and leach off of someone else’. I refused to be that person, I’d be different." Argh. She's gonna do something to push him away. Feeling like she's not deserving of him and that she'd be bad for him, blah, blah, blah. Sometimes I just wanna smack her.
latuacantante4him chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
Hope Bella doesn't let things progress with Edward because of shitty Mike. I hope she opens up to Edward about everything that happened.
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
I feel so sorry for Bella! She's not a burden! Please update again soon.
my1alias chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
I have two favourite parts.

1. The couples. I love their interactions. They're so cute!

2. Emmett, at two times. One, when he's walking on his knees after Rose. Two, when he made friends with the little girl.

pippapear chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
Great chapter!

Thanks for updating...

Glad Bella is starting to recognise the feelings for Edward..

But I wish she could recognise his feelings for her...


Twlightforever chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
So does Bella thinking with Edward the first time was a mistake? Because every time Edward tries to be intimate she runs from it. I know that she is scared of getting hurt. I wonder if you are going to have her and Edward run into Mike. That could be very interesting. Until next chapter
teambellaedward chapter 4 . 10/15/2008
this chapter was the bomb
Jennmc75 chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
I liked their day with his family. Emmett being a movie buff fits nicely. Mike and Jessica both need a serious beat down for what they have done to Bella.
lovesanime92 chapter 8 . 10/15/2008
i like it! plz udpate really sono!
KNG1986 chapter 7 . 10/14/2008
Great Story. I can't wait for the next chapter
lovedforeternity chapter 7 . 10/14/2008
I love this story. I think you are doing a great job with character development. Can't wait for more.

sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 6 . 10/13/2008
O. Bella totally owned that! Brownie points, girl!

Great story. I've never heard it before, and it was so cool how it totally saved the man, whose name escapes me, and Edward. And Em, too! Everyone's happy!

The entire dinner party scene was AMAZING. I loved it!

I am mildly confused about Bella and Edward: so, because of the LAST time they had sex, it was disaterous, they won't do it again, unless they both concend. But they are awkward around one another because of that last time and because little things are brought up about Mike, who Bella refuses to talk about. This may stress somethings in their relationship...
The Unseen Wonder chapter 7 . 10/13/2008
cute! i hope there is more e/b smut in the next chapters.

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