It must be nice to have all that money to just make things happen as you please. Bella has for sure found her Knight in White. But I hope she doesn't go from one controlling man to another.

Edward was very kind to literally pick Bella up off the ground and take her in out of the rain. I hope Bella gets a chance sooner rather than later to let Edward know she's no low life but just down and out right now.

Oh my this Bella is a mess. I'm curious why she stuck it out with such a horrible boyfriend who treated her so badly. And she has no-one to ask for help? Sad.

Ok, I know this wasn’t planned but to have unprotected sex is a big no-no here. My reasoning? Mike was screwing around on Bella for 4 months before Bella found out about it. Mike doesn’t seem like the he is the cautious type about using protection. I think his only worry would be pregnancy. Bella could have an STD. So sad that many women, who were faithful to their partners/husbands, found that they were infected with HIV/AIDS due to their partner’s infidelity. That is the only thing that was really bothering me about this chapter. I’m still loving the story.

Wow, that was so messed up. I’m talking about the situation that Bella has found herself in. Why didn’t she grab her clothes/stuff before she left? Guess she was too distraught to think clearly. So sad

Toujours aussi égoïste dans les fictions et non reconnaissance envers ceux qui l ont aider

Funny thing about independence...

I know this is loosely based on Pretty Woman but Bella is Ivy League educated and sweet with bad taste in men and Vivian was sweet but indeed a whore. Why does everyone think Bella is a whore?

Emmett is right...what? Anyway, Edward is being too nice but after reading your A/N this lynching of the abusing asshole is much better.

You did well. That does sound like a beautiful NYC day minus the inevitable horse flatulence. Oh yeah it happens ;-)

How long is she going to get away with ‘I don’t really want to talk about it?’ I mean this is a guy with well deserved trust issues.

LOVE IT SO MUCH THANK YOU

Great story! Makes me happy :P

This jump in logic makes absolutely no sense. She was saying just a few chapters ago that she didn't want to jump back into something serious, so why is she upset to hear the same from Edward? Yes, Edward could have presented his points better and had a genuine discussion with her about it but unfortunately, Bella doesn't seem to be mature enough to have a conversation and instead indulges her paranoia over being controlled again.

1. I thought you mentioned in an earlier chapter that Charlie was dead...
2. It's really fucked up of Alice to share Bella's story without her consent.