Sooooo lets talk about bellas weird ass comment, "ive been used and abused and it shows in everything I do". First off, lets stop with the weird pity party, second just because her sleazy boyfriend cheated doesn't mean that shes been USED AND ABUSED. It seems to me that bella doesn't have a clue what that actually means. And why would bella feel comfortable staying in a mans hotel room after he just tried to pay her for sex? Especially after the huge scene she made right after he asked "whats this gonna cost me?" She made that huge scene but immediately agreed to stay there, let him pay for everything, and be his date...aka whore.

Why doesn't she just have some fucking pride and stay with a friend? Or go to a shelter? Id like to see bella have some goddamn pride and get out of this hole shes dug for herself BY HERSELF.

Why would Edward call someone to take bella shopping? Is bella not capable of shopping on her own? Isnt Edward a millionaire? cant he just have a personal shopper come to the hotel? The point is, that was just a very CHEAP way to introduce alice. I know that her character has ZERO substance and that shes a worthless fucking meddling cow but must it ALWAYS be shopping? No one wants to read about fucking shopping.

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An amazing read! I really enjoyed and appreciated the hard work, emotions and creativity you put in the story. Thank you so much for sharing your work:-)

Bella acts like shes had it sooooooo hard. Oh I just cant talk about it. Not yet, maybe later I will be ready to talk about it. LOL

I'm sorry but if that's the only problem you got then I want your kind of problems. And she created them herself, she did pick the guy, stay with the guy. I mean come on! Bitch doesn't know what real problems are!

What does Edward mean when he said that it was nice to talk to a women who had something else in her head besides fashion and gossip? Edward said that Tanya was SMART. So surely they had some REAL conversations. He was with her for YEARS after all. And he employs escorts on the regular. Aren't escorts supposed to be a higher level prostitute? Surely they are smarter then your average bimbo.

What a strange contradiction in chapter 6. Edward will not except Bella calling herself a whore, yet he will pay and fuck her like one? Didn't he also say earlier that he didn't care if she was whore aka her "shady past" soooooo according to him its ok to BE a whore but not call yourself a whore?

Hmmm

Like WOW OMG...A whole chapter about SHOPPING and MAKEOVERS...OMG it was like THE BEST EVER

Seriously? Who gives one flying fuck about chapter 5? What a waste of time.

Who talks like this?
"ive been used and abused, and it shows in everything I do"
"just let me pamper you and treat you like the queen you are"

And bella thinks "do guys like this really exist? What do you mean? Do mean that pick up whores and buy them things really exist? Or just guys that pay for sex? Cause ya they do! LOL

Nothing so far about Edward warranted how Bella sees him, I just don't understand it. I see men who are willing to pay for sex as gross, its just ingrained. Once I knew that Edward was willing to pay her and he didn't even care I knew he was a piece of shit. I guess that shit with the escorts was still up in the air cause you didn't actually say he fucked them all, though I did assume that he did.

This is getting embarrassing. "so green...so kind...nothing like mike..." She said that in her sleep huh? YA OOOOOOOOOK.

and Edward with his whole "what I don't understand is my need to protect her." I don't care if shes a whore, Ill take what I can get.
Like that's anything new Mr. I use escort services. Fucking creeper. And Bella is just falling all over herself...hes so kind...strong arms...so beautiful...Bellas kinda pathetic in this story. I hate that shes falling all over this guy she doesn't even fucking know.

Edwards coat smells like lilac and honey? FLOWERS and HONEY?

Is Edward gay? Is that why Tanya was sleeping with someone else? He did say that freeshias or whatever were his FAVORITE...LOL Ok

Edward acts all holier then though, but he just admitted that he uses an escort service. Everyone knows that escorts are whores. Whos he trying to fool?

And he was with Tanya for what 6-7 years before she started caring about her status? All those years of wedded bliss. What did he say about their relationship? That there was so much passion and love between them that the air around them crackled or some bullshit. How does that kind of love die just because Tanya cared about her status in society? Seems like a stupid thing to care about when your with the LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. Edward made it sound like true love. But then she did cheat on him, supposedly. Maybe it was Edwards fault? LOL could have been that skinny body or bushy eyebrows that did Tanya in.

What happened to All of Bella's possessions from when she lived with Mike? Like clothes, laptop, phone, etc.? I'm sure Edward could get them back. Glad she reconnected with Jake. She and Edward are getting closer!

enjoyed your story very mich

It was a wonderful story and beautifully written. The ending was really sweet. I loved reading it.