Bella is just stupid!First she goes to the apartment alone, and almost gets raped, and she didn't listen to Edward about Riley. I could just smack her.

Cute

read this again after a few years and i still love it! but now tbh i think Bella is a lil bitch, like i knew she left Edward because she thinks she can be independent but really a month? and Edward forgives her easily. i know, he loves her and she him, but still i would at least resent her a little if i was Edward. now im happy that this story has a happy ending, but I'd imagine that they have a bit of angst first then the happy ending. like Bella shows her sincerity in apologizing muahaha. okay im evil but honestly i still love this fic so mwah! sorry for my bad english *cringe*

so bella cries cause shes NOT a whore...and Edwards sooo sorry...but then right after that he offers to fucking buy her anyway...just without the sex?
LOL
bella should run away screaming! everyone know that you don't date a guy that would buy a hooker! and Edward just proved that he has no problem paying women he doesn't know to fuck him.

Lol. Shes angry bc he wants to... Continue doing what he's been doing? Haha! Come on, you made this Bella so completely dependent on Mike and then on Edward. He mistakes her for a hooker and she still stays! She lets him buy her clothes and tons of other stuff but it's just until she gets on her feet? She didn't even know him! Now, she's upset and offended that he wants to continue and give her a job that she's clearly qualified for?! She wants independence? I'd do a slow clap for this mess of a leading lady but I would only hear it so... Yeah, no.

Lol this chapter was ridiculous and frustrating. What are they? Teenagers?

Why is Bella always crying at everything. So weak -_-

Lol you clearly don't know how to play chess well...

Well as a proud woman I have no respect for Bella so far... I would never have stayed with a man like that for that long. And women that do stay, piss me off. But I'm curious because you seem like a good writer so I'll carry on and see.

I loved this story! I couldn't stop reading and it's now way passed my bedtime

I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHERE TO FIND READY TO LOVE AGAIN SO I CAN READ IT WWILL YOU PLEASE TELL ME WHERE I CAN FIND IT TO READ IT PLEASE AND PLEASE ANSWER ME THANK YOU.

THAAT WAS GREAT BUT STILL WANT MORE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL YOU HAVE PLENTY OF THINGS TO WRITE ABOUT THANK YOU

I DIDNT HEAR ANY MARRIAGE PERPOSAL IN THAT DID YOU[SNICKER]?

OK LETS SEE WHAT HE DOES NOW ND JUST WHY WAS ANGELA LOOKING AT HER.

JUST TAKE THE JOB STUPID AND ENJOY IT.