I think if she told Esme that Edward thought she was a prostitute when they met, that Esme would understand why she had on a ripped up dress and would be slightly amused that her straight laced son would do that...either that or she would be mortified that he picked up a hooker...I'm not sure which. I think she would be amused at his kind heartedness...maybe. Anyhoo...love the story!

just wonderful!

OOh I can't wait for Edward to find out that Mike Newton is Bella's ex Mike. So frustrating that Edward wants Bella and vice versa, but the fear is stopping progression. I have a feeling that fear won't last...lovely story!

Isn't Edward wonderful...*sigh*...I'm just basking in the lovely glow of this story on a leisurely Monday. Thanks!

Sweet chapter. Triple date! I hope the lovey dovey-ness of the two other couples rubs off on E and B. G'nite. see you tomorrow.

I've never been to NY either and always wanted to go. It all sounded good to me.

Yeah, I really like this chapter. She's a strong woman character who need appreciation and love, not saving...

I'm glad Bella had Alice to intervene unlike someone else who was treated very shabbily...I'm enjoying this and Felix as a flamer is a hoot!

This is quite engaging for a first story. Really! You might want to correct "waste" to "waist" when referring to the middle part of a woman's, or a man's I guess, body...don't be mad...I'm just saying...

I bet this Edward kisses on the lips...

Well, it resembles Pretty Woman somewhat...but in other ways, no. His name is Edward and that's the same...I'm interested enough to see where you take this...

OOh I do hate Mike and wish all that Jessica can do to him, she does...Poor Bella...low self-esteem makes one do things that aren't too smart...

Thank you for such a great read. I really liked this story.

Knit

I knew Edward was going to screw things up because he is scared to love again. But, Bella not listening to him about Manhattan Trust is just as bad. And, she ran away.

They are so good together! I can't wait till the charity event when Edward realizes just who Mike really is!

If this is following the Pretty Woman story line, I am sure that Edward is going to do something stupid like asking Bella to be his mistress.

Love this fic. I have been flouncing right and left lately and this story is sooooo good!

Edward is so sexy...how is Bella able to not succumb to his charms?