Reviews for The First Knot
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Ohhh, this was lovely.
woo chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
this was great! Thanks for sharing. Maiko ftw! :)
DelightingYouAlways chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
This is so sweet. *tears* hehe
ashleydawson chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Aww, Too Cute.

I love Maiko, cause

Zutara is just wrong,

And Toko frankly scares me a little.

But I loved this story(:
Omoni chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
That was just lovely. A wonderful, well-written, in-character feast of sensual romance. Oh, so amazing.
drinkingtea chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Well written,grammar errors here and there. But nonetheless,it was acceptable to my eyes.

I know Ali Wildgoose! Talked to her on twitter,she's working on The Last Airbender manga coming out next year. :]

- Jun
Orange chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
This is such an awesome fic - I love the fluffiness! The two of them are so perfect together, and I love the way you write them. Your perspective on Mai especially is spot-on: many people make her too emotional or else pathetic next to Zuko, but you manage to perfectly convey her normal emotional control while still showing the strength of their love for each other. The best was that scene where she's sitting on the bench listening to the generals - it's so hopeful for the future and makes them seem so strong together. Some of the best Maiko I've ever seen.
Pungahn chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
very good story! i liked it a lot :D
SnowReflection chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
such a sweet story x
thebrunetteone chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Wow. I love it.
Jestry chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Whha, that's super cute.

It totally captures Mai and Zuko's personality and relationship. It's so subtle, but it's there anyway. LOVE THIS.
Callencia chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This is such a beautiful story. I think you got Mai's personality dead on. Maiko is my favorite avatar couple and you just made my day. _
Heliza chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Fantastic ... just fantastic.

Really enjoyed reading it - you must update soon! xD
Lythya chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
I LOVED IT! YOU CAPTURED THE CHARACTERS PERFECTLY! YOU'RE AWESOME! SIMPLY AWESOME!

Ahem ...

Well, it's funny, I've used some of the same things in my own fanfic, like the "I kind of love you," part xD Funny we both thought that that's what she'd say. Well, it's Mai!

Hope you have more fanfics like this!
Let It ALL Out chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
AW! SO CUTE! :) :) :)
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