|Reviews for The End|
| Btroisi chapter 5 . 12/28/2017
Very nice story.
| M chapter 5 . 1/15/2017
3 I believe I have read your piece before, but have just forgotten... nevertheless it was amazing to read it! Thank you! 3
| HarnGin chapter 4 . 9/17/2015
This chapter needs a trigger warning. It brought back all the emotions I felt when my own father passed away (and that was nearly 16 years ago!).
Don't feel untowardly guilty; it's not a bad thing to make your readers feel.
| I found my Mr. Darcy chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
Perfectly lovely. Thank you.
| C5 chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
Wonderfully written! I needed that! Thanks
| sillyvamp chapter 5 . 4/3/2014
| riapichay chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
beautifully done. I cried and cried but it was so beautiful
| Z Grilles chapter 5 . 4/3/2013
This was utterly beautiful. A most real, touching, perfect picture of grief and moving on. I liked the personalities and histories you gave them - very plausible.
I applaud you for this story. I loved it.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
I will have you know I totally cried.
| EmlynMara chapter 5 . 7/27/2012
Nicely done. Very enjoyable glimpses. They each struggled and they each grew.
| gems13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
loved it., nd cried with it a lot thanks for writing it
| DG chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
I'm sure you don't look at these reviews anymore but i felt I had to tell you how beautiful this is. Not many stories tackle death and the 'what happens to those left behind?'. It is really well written and quite wonderful and heartbreaking and heart-warming all at once. Thank you for sharing :)
| ppl chapter 5 . 10/11/2011
Wow! Just. Wow.
It was beautiful. Heart breakingly beautiful.
Sad. Wonderful. Hopeful. Joyous. Happy. True.
You write beautifully.
With much talent.
| PinkGray chapter 5 . 6/19/2011
I can barely make out what I'm typing as my eyes are still blurry from the tears. Really, I loved this so much. Usually OCs are a dangerous thing to deal with, but the way you write their five children make them so real, so part of the story that I would believe they are the Darcy children, if the story had continued.
It was absolutely beautiful, and I thank you for writing it.
| The Last Time Lord chapter 5 . 3/8/2011
Absolutely beautiful... An amazing story about love. Good job! and keep it up!