Reviews for The Mission
xxxmizuki-chanxxx chapter 3 . 9/13/2009
YAY i love this story please update soon
9tailedemonfoxonbu chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
AWSOME STORY please update as quick as possible cant wait.

-9tailedemonfoxonbu
kaminariyoru chapter 3 . 10/24/2008
UPDATE SOON! You are doing great on this story keep it up!

Wells I gots to goes

Ja Ne

.MEOW!
ANBU Inu chapter 2 . 9/25/2008
Umm... Well, you have a few errors. The first is that every time someone different speaks, you need to start a new paragraph. Or else it's all jumbled into this state. The second one (that I noticed) is that you keep putting mama instead of ma'am. But I like the story line. If you could just change those two things, it would make my experience reading this much more enjoyable. Thanks, and bye!
sunnydayhorray chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Nice first chapter but a little short.

Also if your gonna do anything... 'extra curricular' then make absolutely sure you make it an M.

Also Sakura seems a little bit wise for a six year old. Still I'll keep an eye on it please add another chapter soon _