|Reviews for Once Touched|
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 17 . 3/9
This alternate ending was still just as emotional for me. Sorry to say but I don't know if one is better than the other, I was affected by both.
TY for sharing your idea. I was captivated by this story.
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 15 . 3/9
That was more emotion than I was expecting and not the ending I was hoping for either but still very well written. It was a great story and a great idea. Thx for sharing.
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 13 . 3/9
I hope by them telling Dumbledor he will provide protection for them while in the great hall.
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 11 . 3/8
That was truly beautiful
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 7 . 3/8
That scene was intense and beautiful. TY
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 4 . 3/8
Wow this is interesting.
| Calenmiriel Greenleaf chapter 17 . 3/7/2014
Girl, you really need to check yourself if you're happy with this ending... Letting a man fall into a depression over 18 years is definitely NOT the ending most of your readers wanted, I'm sure...
This is worse than the last one! At least with the last one, I could make myself imagine SOME sort of miracle happening and Harry waking up normal and actually having happiness for once...
I feel sorry for another emotionally challenged person, like me, that has to read this... Your summary and genre selection is pretty damn misleading, and you probably just made me therapist a very happy person, considering how much time I'll be spending there after getting through this...
| Calenmiriel Greenleaf chapter 15 . 3/6/2014
So Harry's dead? That's it? That makes absolutely no sense... This should be labeled a tragedy instead of romance... The main character dies, and I haven't seen a bit of romance here...
| Calenmiriel Greenleaf chapter 4 . 3/6/2014
You need to put warnings about this story containing mentions of rape in your summary, and any other chapter it appears in...
I get its your story, and people can't tell you what to do, but for a rape victim, this chapter was excruciating to read... And I'd like to think that you'd have enough sympathy, not to let another victim go through what I just went after reading this...
Panic attacks can kill if we don't know how to shut it down, or if some one is not with us... A warning would be the humane thing to do, am I right?
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
love love love this chapter specially the last line
| sleepyalicedreams chapter 18 . 12/6/2013
I've been sitting here reading this story all day. It is one of the best I have ever read on the website since I found it over five years ago. The last chapters had so much emotion in then I was crying my eyes out but still couldn't stop reading. I HAD to know what happened. It is a very good read that had me on the edge of my set. Everybody who likes this pairing NEEDS to read this story. It puts a whole new light onto it.
| misuky7 chapter 18 . 11/27/2013
I loved both endings, this story was really interesting. :3
| Amanda chapter 4 . 10/14/2013
Totally love the way you write the story!
| Heather Dehmer chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
I can't find the rewrite on your profile.
| TRIC4R chapter 5 . 6/11/2013
Loving how the story is shaping up