Can't wait for the sequel! This was really good and Screamer really DOES have the perfect defense doesn't he? God I love seekers!

interesting

Your story is a very interesting take on Screamer and I enjoyed reading it once I finally got into the story. I had to push myself through the first half, I think it was the lack of tension that made it slow for me, but once Screamer started double looking at Skyfire's actions I became more intrigued. Though the ending still feels odd. I completely agree with the idea of Screamer defecting, but he seems to quick to trust Skyfire again. Granted, he didn't really turn into a Con but he was lying to Starscream and really scared him. I'd be overly cautious around such a person for awhile.

But still, a good enough story to make me head over to your profile in a minute and look up that sequel you mentioned.

Ooh, that was a really interesting take on their relationship :) incredibly long, but very well-written and intriguing. Well done!

I really enjoyed this story and I was wondering if the sequel is coming uo soon or are you waiting to Finish 28?

Great story. Only Skyfire would be able to snap Starscream out of it. I loved the story. I didn't see the ending coming. In the beginning of the story I thought Skyfire was doing what he did at the end but I slowly didn't think that anymore, especially when he killed humans horribly. I was really happy when it turned out that it was just a plan for Starscream. I just wonder if the Autobots are ready for Starscream.

This was amazing.

Sadly the Skywarp thing made me really angry.

But the end was comforting enough.

A very beautiful story.

Wow! Skyfire really had me convinced of his change. I'm so glad to learn that it's just an act and that it worked, too.

I love this. Can't wait for you to get around to the sequel. I love how you've portrayed the all charaters, the storyt flows well and the twist at the end. Keep up the good writing!

Holy crap, even if it was an "act" Skyfire still scares me. Poor Starscream, everyone manipulates him for better or worse. D:

Wow. This is a really amazing story! I really like the emotions and the ending. I am planning to draw out several pages of the story in a comic; but I want to ask for your permission first. May I?

I... um... wow. I want to hug you now. I don't think I've ever had a story bring up so many different emotions in me. I seriously closed this story twice because it was making me mad, but I kept going back to finish it. Glad I did.

I officially adore this story now. The changes in Starscream were just amazing, and I kept thinking that this has to be some kind of ruse or prank (or you're just a very twisted author who bastardizes characters, but I'm so glad I was wrong about that) because no way would Skyfire actually do that...

Okay, I'll stop ranting now.

This was AWESOME!

Well, this was very interesting!

I never thought that all was just a act

really looking forward for the sequel!

This was absolutely brilliant. I am at a loss for words to describe just how good this was. Everything was excellent! I was so sad about Skyfires' 'transformation', and then you bust out the awesome ending- yay!

I'm glad Starscream gets a chance at redemption, and the history you invented for the war/Starscream etc. was really well done. A sequel would be much appreciated. :)

so wow. just wow.

(note: this is the most enthusiastic review of my life thus far. congrats.)

Thanks!