Reviews for Crescenzo's Academy
tinkita chapter 10 . 2/12/2009
Fantastic story! I love it! Please update soon!
Ladynight chapter 10 . 2/11/2009
I love this story so much. I just finished re-reading it for the second time. I can't wait for the next chapter. I have one tiny question though, In the chapter were Draco meets Kyler's friends for the first time. Nicolas ask draco if he has an animal form and Draco says yes but doesn't elaborate. Yet in the last chapter Draco joined the animagus club cause he didn't have a form. Did you mean that he didn't have a second form like Kyler and his friends? And if so is the grizzly bear he's second or first and what is his other form?
odango3 chapter 10 . 2/9/2009
This story is fantastic! I can't wait for more!
zesty cyanide chapter 10 . 2/6/2009
i think the order should learn who kyler is when he is 17 and not before, because if not then they could make him change school and whatnot because he is a minor!

update soon pleaasee
Ilamay chapter 10 . 2/6/2009
I love it! Thanks for writing it. :)
miadragonlover chapter 10 . 2/6/2009
Awesome awesome awesome awesome! I am totally in love with this story! I cannot wait until you get the next chapter! I almost cried when Draco opened the package and it had the ring in it! It was so sad... But its better now! You made me smile and laugh afterwards! Especially with this last scene! YAY! Draco's got his Veela back! I can't wait for more! Please update again soon! Excellent story!

kikisgoofy chapter 10 . 2/5/2009
Interesting story.
Kikigoofy chapter 10 . 2/5/2009
This is an awesome story. Keep up the good work.
Lientjuhh chapter 10 . 2/4/2009
I normally don't like draco/harry... but this one is good and they aren't enemies because of hogwarts.. Well done.. :) though they are related closely.. I mean.. draco's great-grandfather was a black and his sister married a potter.. So.. But I like it.. :) Well done.. :)
maelaw chapter 10 . 2/3/2009
Excellent. I am looking forward the next chapter.
meraki13 chapter 10 . 2/2/2009
Another great chapter. :)
impatientuser chapter 10 . 2/2/2009
Excellent... I look forward to more. Thanks for writing )
Victoria Humblydum chapter 10 . 2/1/2009
First off, in the second scene I noticed that you repeated certain words several times within just a few sentences where it would be perfectly fine to use pronouns or substituted in another word. In the same scene you also used the word "men" or "man" about 6 times to describe various male students. This is a bit of a pet peeve of mine. Although I don't mind using the word to describe someone as you have occasionally, you have to remember that the people you're talking about are around 16 or 17, so I feel it's a bit of a stretch.

I found several places where you need commas and didn't have them or had them where you didn't need them. There were also times when the sentence simply didn't make sense. For example phrases like "and did the little gestures just a surprises" and "It was not uncommon for his to come" popped up every so often. I would suggest getting a beta or, if you already have one, getting a second one who is very good at proofreading for the things that your spellcheck doesn't catch.

On the same train of thought, I was wondering specifically about the phrase "he got reamed out." I was wondering if it was just a typo or if "reamed" is slang for something. I didn't feel comfortable putting it in the category of a typo because it's unusual enough that it could be slang for something that I don't know, and I was just interested.

Other than that, I'm really liking this story. I'm extremely excited for the upcoming chapters now that Draco's back to his normal, hormonal self. It should be fun seeing his and Harry's relationship progress a bit faster now.

~Victoria H.
silversongs chapter 10 . 2/1/2009
Thanks for the awesome new chapter! This is a well thought out story line that is refreshing in this genre. Not the cookie cutter versions I've read. Thank you for your time and effort writing this for your dedicated readers! Keep up the great work!
lilybean chapter 10 . 1/31/2009
wo ho veelas back
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