|Reviews for Metamorphosis|
| sherryola chapter 21 . 2/14
This story was on my favorites list but I don't remember it. I've had a wonderful time rereading and experiencing this. I love love love it. It's the best epov of breaking dawn I've read. You've really given us something, much more than just a copy of BD with a few Edward throughts thrown in. It's been a true delight to read.
| TaiKee chapter 21 . 12/19/2013
Thanks loved the story, great Edward POV - loved the plot and story fill ins and extra character development!
| qhrciskrpc chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
like this a lot. whole story.
| Amineh1825 chapter 21 . 8/9/2013
Maybe you should write a sequel.
| louvecb chapter 19 . 7/29/2013
i'm french and i read your book to google traduction (is no so evidence) becuase my english is really so bad (you know i think ;))
i know the final but i cry because is so incredible what you write.
| Futurefamboo chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Your story is very good but the only bad thing is that you did it from Edward pov because its sort of like a dairy or you in Edwards brain he wouldn't be thinking like the way you put it for example you put him saying
'She pushes herself up on her elbows and sighs'
Your story would be much better if you did the whole story like this
'she pushed herself up on her elbows and sighed'
You would get more views and likes to thats why i really don't like this story
| MulliMom chapter 20 . 6/3/2013
I don't know another way to post the rest of my response. Sorry for the finger slip.
Sorry typing on my phone. Anyway, I have reread the series so many times and of course watched the movies. I was so frustrated with Midnight Sun that I just happened to google the title and finished. That's how I found fan fiction a couple of months ago. I have read all sorts of fanfic since then, my new obsession, and out of all the EPOV (my favorite) this is by far the best I've read! I apologize for not commenting until the end but I figured you were long past this story and I like to reserve my opinion until I'm done. Thank you for writing this! This is my favorite part of the series and you have made it come to life in a whole new way! I plan to read your other work now, all of it! I laughed and cried more than I did when I read the original! This is truly a work of art and I thank you for the enormous gift. I can only imagine where you had to go to write this.
| MulliMom chapter 21 . 6/3/2013
I have been obsessed with the Twilight series since the day I picked up the first book, which happened to be just after Breaking Dawn was released. My students couldn't put them down to get ready for Biology, so I figure I'll read what they are so that I have better relationships with my students. Well, needless to say, a lot of grading went undone as I read the entire series from cover to c
| Guest chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
That was the best chapter ever! You are a pure genius! I love every aspect and I have tears reigning down my face! Incredible!
| k1942 chapter 21 . 3/22/2013
You did a really great job of leading all of us through Edward's mind, letting us hear how much he loves Bella, his daughter and his family. He had such responsibility during the encounter with the Volturi and everything leading up to that! So great and so impressive, I loved it, thank you!
| k1942 chapter 20 . 3/22/2013
After holding my breath, I think I'm nearly as happy as the Cullens and all their friends are!
| k1942 chapter 19 . 3/22/2013
I too like Garrett, especially when he tells Kate he'll follow her anywhere! Hate the Volturi, love the wolves. The farewells just made me cry, even though I've read Breaking Dawn four times!
| k1942 chapter 18 . 3/22/2013
I'm with you about how disgustingly evil Jane is! Too bad someone doesn't juspull her apart and burn her pieces! As for Irina, she was just sadly mistaken and chose to believe the worst about people she supposedly cared for. All the mental dialogue betweeb Aro and Edward was fascinating!
| k1942 chapter 17 . 3/22/2013
They have done all they could to prepare and ready themselves for this confrontation. All that's left is Carlisle's prayer and the hopes of the others, that everything turns out well!
| k1942 chapter 16 . 3/22/2013
With imminent danger looming over their heads,the Cullens still managed to have Christmas. The best gift Edward and Bella gave each other , was their love. Doesn't get any better than that!