Reviews for Dusk
MyHamstersHateMe chapter 8 . 8/15/2014
rozardoll chapter 7 . 7/14/2010
That fucking dick of a father. No wonder Akaya's mom and sister left. They should've just taken him with them, those idiots. Grrr. His father pisses the fuck outta me. He should go to jail. Fuck him. Ah. Poor Niou... Kiri-tan died on their anniversary...

Anywho, good story! The smut part wasn't really there but it was good enough! Good job :3
BakemonoShoujo chapter 6 . 6/16/2009
wow those letters are so sweet _
Wisteria-Child chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
That was soo sad... T-T Poor Akaya, poor Masaharu. O~oh! I hate Akaya's father here! . Why did he have to kill Akaya! What the hell! What kind of father is he?-? .
Wisteria-Child chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Poor Akaya. So sad... Y-Y
Lahdolphin chapter 8 . 1/21/2009
I cried, well, teared up. I never cry/tear while reading!

I probably cried/teared because I love Akaya (NOT LIKE THAT)

I like the whole story, it flowed pretty good. Um, I am not good at writing reviews XD

Nice job!
Kerushi-Nee-Chan chapter 8 . 1/19/2009 was so sad! I loved it BEAUTIFUL! T-T
M3lanch0ly chapter 8 . 11/21/2008
animeo chapter 8 . 10/9/2008
I comend you on this story. You have accomplished a, formerly, unreachable made me cry at the end of a story. Like quite litterally CRY MY FREAKIN EYES OUT! because it was such a happy story, and I had a feeling like his dad would find out, but I had no idea that something of that degree would happen. The sad thing that things of that nature actually occur its a horrible thing, thanks for bringing that to light no matter how difficult that might have been (course it might not have been since I'm not you.)

The worst I've ever done in a story is have Tezuka brutally cut a person up...yea...and have 'him' -cough niou cough- rip apart Eiji with a pen and his bare hands...that though...yea...for entertainment not to actually push a story along such as yourself.

once again I comend you...I'm going to go and cry some more now...

offthewebby chapter 8 . 10/2/2008
NO! NO NO NO NO! NO! I LUVD THIS FIC D': WHY DID U HAVE 2 KILL KIRIHARA! SO SAD! (but at the same time like i said luvd it!) YOU MADE NIOU CRY...thats gota be a crime...

KAWAII X3 LUVD IT IHATEHISFUCKINASSFATHER! *grabs chainsaw and kills his father!* DUMB ASS DUN EVER MESS WITH HIM AGAIN! once again amazing!

HiDiNgFrOmYoU chapter 8 . 10/1/2008
OMG! That was so sad and so KAWAII! Aw i 'm so sad Aka-chan died... oh's such a sweet ending... kinda like the ending of the song concrete angel but different...
verbal acuity chapter 8 . 9/28/2008

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You killed my bby! D;


ihatehisfather. Dx

I really liked this story. Their love was just so cute. And I stopped getting email updates for ANYTHING from FF. It makes me sad. But anyway. D;

You should definitely write more NiouKiri. It's my favorite pairing, and you write it well. You're braver than me. xD I'm too scared of killing off my bby. kekeke.

Nice story~ D:
verbal acuity chapter 7 . 9/27/2008
-fangirling- God, these two are so cute! djsglkas;

( x 0 x); But anyway.

You like... killed me with fluff in this one. I loved it~ Please update soon. Dx I'm looking forward to the final chapter and your new NiouKiri story~ ( o )v
verbal acuity chapter 6 . 9/26/2008
I cannot believe I'm online this late. ( x 0 x);

Goodness, you're so much more better at updating than I am. xD And you write a way better Niou than I ever could. I gotta work on my trickster self, eh? keke.

So, I totally looked up that song on youtube and, ohmy, she is really good with English! And Japanese! Amazing! ndkgahs; -flails-

But anyway. I definitely love the fact that you've made Niou sort of poetic in his love for Akaya. It's just really adorable the way he cares. I love when my bby is happy. 83

The first letter was adorable, and the second one made me just wanna hug Niou. He's so pervy most of the time, yet romantic when he wants to be. I love it~

Update soon! I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work~
verbal acuity chapter 5 . 9/26/2008
"Niou made another humming noise and stepped back.

They both missed the warmth."

I loved that. Though... what did the paper say? D; I am confused. I read it again, but... I didn't see anything that said what the letter had said. ;o;

Enjoyed the chapter~ The end with Niou and Kirihara was so cute. Update soon~ o
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