Reviews for Secret OneShot
Agonidzo777 chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
Will you complete this story or leave us hanging? what did Bella and Jacob talk about?
Crazybee3 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I loved this :)

I know you wrote a continuation of this and I also know that you havent update in over a year. I hope you are fine and have not given up on the story..

Good luck and thank you!
renochick chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Your Secret one shot caught my eye and I really liked it and was happy to discover it's been expanded into a story. Yay for me!
FayRay chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Is this story on Hiatus have missed you please continue if you can love this story Seriously waiting !
mommymac0508 chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
Yea I really liked it yummy
blb1000 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Whew! Very nice for your first lemon. I can only hope for more in the near future.
miamiaka chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
This one-shot was really really great. I was looking for a good romance story between my favorite characters from the book and sure i found one. I loved how you manage to mix the deep love that Edward felt for Bella with sexual tension. The lemon, which i liked, was interesting because of that, since it never got too dirty that we forget that is not only about sex, but most importantly about how those two love one another, but couldnt be together. I have a terrible memory, so only when i finish reading and looked for the continuation of this story i found out i have (and am) actually read the full story, but didnt read the one shot that inspired it all... I think, and i hope i dont offend, since i like the full story too and have it in my favorites, that i prefer the one shot because of the focus on the romance. It almost fell to me like they are completely diffente stories, because the felling of this one-shot is impossible love, while the full story surronds with mistery, and the straining between the main charactes. Again, i like the full story too, but this one-shot for me pretty much stands up on its own as great a tale of romance. I actually saw that this was published about a year ago, but i still find it deserved a review because i loved it, and am actually curius about what stories won the contest inted of this one. Sorry if im rambling too much!
Audizzle chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
It was really good. Well done for your first lemon!
amwine chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I love this! Great job!
LucieMay chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
please continue i would love to know what happens when/if charlie finds out xoxPureFireworksxox
Tanyab423 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
It is an AWESOME story and WOW on the lemon! I loved it
FenixMJR chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Very good story, love the lemon, and now to the sequel...
x-brain.strain-x chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
your writing is really amazing

i love just the way you say things!

i cant explain it... its just the contrasts that u include along with the detail and the crazy love! its perfect

i mean u just get ur point through so clearly and its so hard t do that

this was amazing really

great job!
mangocider chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
totally loved it!
Hazelnut4o6 chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
So I'm guessing this was the next chapter then?

LOVED IT! EFFING BRILLIANT!
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