Reviews for Secret OneShot
curlyk03 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
yes you should continue :)

very cute and sweet.
christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
You should definitely continue this. I would love to read the story with this plot. Edward is just so adorable in this with his nervousness. Great job.
Sabelina chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Damn . . . Go ON!
margie wolf chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
one word...HOT!...
eks chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I love M5...one of my fav songs.
adrena813 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Hi- I really loved your one shot! I hope you decide to turn it into a full story. You are a very good writer...very visually decriptive. Not in a smutty way either...I really felt Edwards internal struggle. The fight between what he thought was right in his head and what his heart (and body)wanted was so passionate! And then with the rain, lightning and thunder outside...you just really painted a great "picture." I love stories from Edward's POV - they are my faves. Hop you decide to stick with it! Cheers, Adrena
Goo82 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
OMG CONTINUE! this would be an awesome story.. like if you had them try to keep the relationship from charlie and charlie tries setting Bella up. and such and you have jealous edward having to see that and Bella trying to help edward keep his ob so she goes along with it for a bit.

Good job girl this was amazing.
reginah72 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
loved it!
stavanger1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
this would make an awesome story, just one request, don't make it too angsty? :) Anyway, It was good, thanks
luvrofink chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
i loved that. it was incredible. i think you should keep going with it!
magically-strange chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
continue? u damn well better! this story rocks! only ur first lemon? ur kidding me! it was amazing!
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Yes, you are so going to keep going with this...it has a lot of potential! And for your first lemon...holy crap! Very hot! Great job!
vampygrl04 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
That was REALLY good. I liked it and yes I think you should continue!

XOXO, Vampy
jackiehydelover chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I really liked this and would like you to continue... But I'd like you to start with the build up to this. Like when they first meet each other. And I love that Bella is a journalist because cops don't always like them because they're so nosy lol... Could make it very interesting if Bella is snooping around in something dangerous (she is a danger magnet after all). Just a though :D
sweetishbubble chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
LOved it. You should turn it into a full story.
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