Reviews for Secret OneShot
lovedwardalways chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
that was wonderful I would love to continue reading this, the storyline is great and It would be a interesting twist on them sneaking around behind charlie's back. there could be some good lemony situations and maybe even some ways they could nearly be caught by charlie that would be good. please continue it.
oceaneyes85253 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
this would be a good idea for a story
briiittx xhc chapter 1 . 9/21/2008

That was so cute!

You should defitenly continue!
freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
very nice! that was really great for a first lemon! i'd love to read more of this or anything else you write!
kolfan88 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
You NEED to make this into a full story! lol I want to read about how they met at the banquet and how they fell in love!
sc-girl-11 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Aw - that was such a sweet, well-written lemon that felt less like porn and more like a good, well-developed story that just happened to end in sex!

I really enjoyed your writing style and reading this story. :)
icefang7 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
really good, please continue and thanks
ItsMeElla chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
omg please please continue! That was amazing! I really want to see how they work out their relationship and how his work is more hot lemons!
l'heure bleue chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! I would love more. This was freaking amazing. I LOVE IT!

Mandie12341 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Wow that was really good, you should really make it into a full story i would love to read it. D
octoberangyl chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I really really enjoyed that it would make a good story if you continue it
hope4more chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
OMG...Great JOB.

But of course I knew you had it in you. And I was pleasantly surprised at how well you wrote your "lemon". I really think you will need to continue this...but of course you still need to update the other one as well.

(Hanging my head for a moment) I was a little bummed that I wouldn't be laughing my ass off tonight at your update on A New Sensation. But with that said, I got to get all hot and bothered by your intimacy with Bella and Edward.

BTW, are you an 80's fan? I must say I did grow up in the 80's and I am surprised at how much you seem to know. I about died when you had Heart as your theme for your other chapter. I am a total geek when it comes to cheesy/love ballads of the 80's. (My husband pretends to not know me when I play that stuff) LOL

Anyhoo...sounds like you have been busy. But you rock just the same. Awesome job my friend, apparently you can write anything. NO LIE.

Have a great night..Brook :)
lheartlibros chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
it was great, i would love to have more of a story to read, it seems like it would be really interesting, would they have to hide it(that would make for some good quick lemons, haha) go for it!
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I loved it and would love to see it turned into a full story!
u2ugly2nv chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Oh my god! That was so good. and the concept is genius.. You have to Make it a Full Story... you got to... pretty please..
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