|Reviews for Loss|
| twilightjunkie77 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
| BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| x-rayLady chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Oh, dang, this cannot be a one-shot! Tell me you still have those ideas in your head... It's really a master piece in reversing the situation and I really like it! And the wink to the kiss in New Moon only sank in when I read she was talking about Jake. It's brilliant!
| Karma32 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Oh my hell Grace, if you don't expand this story, I may do something drastic.. binge eat, have a break down, delve into some serious alcohol consumption.. you get my drift. PLEASE? With sugar and a shirtless Jake on top?
| Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Ok...I cried for Bella, this works really well as a one shot...would be awesome if it were expanded but I guess this allows us your readers to let our little imaginations go flying, although I'm certain that no one would complain if you decided to point us in the right direction...once again that was really very good
| thebella12 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
i like this story!
| Justcurious8 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Well, it's been 9 months but if you are willing to continue, I'm up for a new story! though it is good how it is! I LOVE it! Great job!
| xXxKamia-JadexXx chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
That was so sad but cute at the same time ;_; I really hope you'll continue on with it
| kerryfofo chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
wow its a really touching story!
so sad. i had tears in my eyes.
hope that you continue on with the story- id love to read more.
love your other stories too :D
your new fan
| SusanL chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I hope you Do come back to this someday. But AFTER you've finished your other stories ;)
| tinklove chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
aww... it was so sad in the begining because i thought it was Edward and it's going to end sad
but then i found out it was Jacob, i got instantly happy...sorry if your a Jacob fan but I am for Edward hehe
but great story, you could write more and make it longer, i would definetly like to read more
| xLady-Salvatore-Belikovax chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I could seriously cry right now..
This is so sad.. yet happy (the Edward thing) and AAHH! It's soo ahmazing..
Man, I've been listening to On A Day Like Today by Keane while reading, and wow. It fits, and it makes it even more sad..
And congrats for the nomination in the Twilight Awards! Best of luck! :D
| dragonflyidt chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
It's just a one-shot...Me: sad! Lol. It was so sweet. I loved it!
| Shadowed Ember chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Ok, it's me again. Pretty much everything applicable that I said when I reviewed "My Beloved Window" still holds true, and before I have to leave the computer I would like to quickly add that I would love it if you expanded it. So, I will put it on story alert on the off chance that you will!
| demolitionLover chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
well. THAT was unexpected.
i thought it was edward who died. until she actually met edward again.
took me a while :)
it was the perfect gentleman thing...although, of course, jacob would be too. but. you know.
i love it. even if it was REAL sad.