|Reviews for Everything|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Yes, there was a very much lack of smut on the show, haha XD I very much enjoyed this, and I can't wait to read some more of your writing! This has to be only about the fifth fanfiction I've read in this fandom, but it was amazing and well worth my time. See you in your next fic! :D
| Lucas4everPeyton chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
please...that was beautiful...i would love to read more
| inevitablevauseman chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
i absolutley loved it.
| sweetandsombre chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Perfect! I adored it,
Why didn't this happen on the show? I would have preferred that so much.
| lovethefacade chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Dude, there is no need for blame when it comes to a smut overload. Everyone loves LP smut - and you write it wonderfully. BUT I agree, this show NEEDS LP sexin'...badly! XD
| LPlover chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Wow! I've always love to read any LP fics after 316 or any version of it and this is PERFECT! :-) I like the way you portrayed their emotions,I'm cried when peyton crying lol I'm such a girl.I was surpirised when Lucas said "we broke up" cos I didn't see it coming :D Great job leyton-is-lovee! :D:D:D Overall everything is just wonderful, if only the show would have played out like this I imagine how amazing it could be *sigh* I actually wanted to leave my review when I finish reading "Keep Holding On"(I am a little behind still in chapter 9 now LOL)but this one-shot screamed asking me to review LOL Keep writing you're awesome,your stories amazing I floved them! ;-)
| tseday871221 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
I just love your work! EXCELLENT!
| jordanfan360 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
| LeytonIsAlways chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
OMG, that was simply PERFECT! I loved it all! Are you going to continue?..please do! :)
| godsandmonsters chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Wow, can I say that I love you for writing this? Yeah I will. This is exactly what I've been waiting for to be written. I was always fascinated with the shooting storyline and the possibility of LP. But every fanfiction I've read has portrayed it wrong. You basically did exactly what I wished someone would write I love you for that. :)
I loved when they were on the dock at being all flirty, that was one of my favorite parts. Another favorite part- Lucas kissing Peyton's leg. Lucas has always had a thing for them so I always thought the perfect thing for him to do was kiss them from ankle to thigh and you wrote it! I actually wrote that down in one of my drafts lol!
So anywho job well done. :)
| a.k.a.-ashley chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Utter perfection. Honestly, such a great piece of writing.
| Avschick33 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
That was amazing! Loved it. Seriously, you have a great talent. I can't wait for more from you!
| lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
i loved it, this was awesome!
| micamariani chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
omgosh... yesterday i was searching for a fic after school shooting and one the day after the psycho attack..
and today i open my mail box to see this one about the shooting..
amazing one shoot...
love all your fics.. at least, the happy ones ;)
| othstewy chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Amazing as always! A great take on the post shooting episode. Everything you write is done so well. Keep up the fantastic work!