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| SmileysBasis2 chapter 22 . 11/26/2013
So you're telling me all I have to do is disappear for a couple of, oh I dunno, years, and then you'll update my favorite story? Man so much has happened where to begin... In short I love it, as always. I'm excited progress is being made with their relationships, both romantic and familial. So happy the outers are there, you already know how I feel about them. I'm glad you went through and did some updates! That's what I am in the process of doing myself. That being said I WILL hold out hope that some day you will return to this story or this site and we can return to our telephone method of reviewing :) Hope all is well.
| Sailor Saturn fan chapter 22 . 11/8/2013
Noooo! Update fast pleaseeee!
What happens? Such curiosity I should have some more Hotaru moments!
Well UPDATE ASAP!
| Sadekuuro chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
I have to say I love this fic! Your characterizations are great, and I love the pairings (especially Ami/Wufei). I'm especially interested to see what happens now that Haruka and Michiru have arrived!
I know you're currently revising, but will there be an update soon? I really can't wait to read more!
| nequam-tenshi chapter 22 . 10/28/2012
I have been re-reading your story from the start to the most recent chapter - I keep crying! I like how you are giving each pairing equal spotlight!
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/29/2012
Ami having psychological issues with facing her problems really fascinates me right now! It just fits so well with her character! XD
Anyhow the bad guy is epic ;) I definitely laughed at the mention of all those shows and though they are supposed to be kid friendly and all they do make me cringe lol I mean Spongebob my gosh I once fell asleep during one of those shows and his laugh haunted me in my dreams ; It was pretty scary. But in short, I can definitely relate to the cringing effect some of those shows have heh. Quatre and Ami make the most adorable set of siblings in my opinion. They are both just so sweet! I also died with the memory with Ami and Wufei. I love those two and you do those scenes so well! XD Geez those two are great together.
I really loved the bit between Trowa and Hotaru. Having those two up late also fits their character. It was interesting to see into his thoughts on their situation and his reflection on Minako and her character was really insightful. And my goodness I can't believe you stopped before we got to see Haruka's uptake on the situation XD lol
What a horrible cliff hanger! I definitely look forward to seeing her reaction soooooo bad!
Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to seeing the juicy twist you'll be adding! I do love twists! Wonderful job with this update and I can't wait to see more from you! And keep up the great work!
| MegaKat chapter 22 . 6/23/2012
As always, a GREAT chapter! Some corrections needed, of course, but I'm waiting with bated breath to see Haruka-papa kick some braided ass? That would be worth watching! :D
| angelic.aquarian chapter 22 . 6/23/2012
Yay a chapter. poor Trowa... i so love him and Mina. with what you were saying about her being strong and not showing weakness is so true. it just gave me an image of Mina rambling on and fighting with Trowa while he just waits to catch her when she has no fight left. sad lol
oh Ami lol she is too cute with her blushing ways lol.
also loved learning a bit more about the bad guys.
great story can't wait for more
| Oombala chapter 21 . 5/12/2012
Wonderfully written, as per usual! And you're driving memup the wall with giddiness with he quatrexmakoto stuff going on! 3 Soooooo ready for more!
| Nerf-or-Nothing chapter 21 . 5/12/2012
Dear god, this is incredable! WHERE HAVE I BEEN! Oh yeah I'm moving and my jerky ex is trying to take the laptop from me :C
But I am here now and WOW! I LOVE IT!
Your grammar and attention to detail and description like always, is done well and only gets better with every time you write something!
I'm so happy to see more updates, it's really great how you guys are doing this. Thank you so much for all your hard work c: it makes me really happy.
Now onto the review!
Wufei really isn't that much of a woman hater, your right. There were circumstances that led to his feminine-hating ways. With his wife and what happened, it was no wonder, he was a scholar and he's chinese and women are viewed differently. An arranged marriage but he did fall in love with her, perhaps to little to late :c
I agree with you on Hiiro not being so cold with family around, as he had been kind with the young girl and her dog and showed a true gentle heart underneath all the cold feelings from war. It's like he was apathetic so he could do his missions properly, and blames his emotions for killing them and thus tried to kill off the emotions to prevent it ever happening again.
Your story does show these sides of them, and bringing them out in the fashion you are, only makes the story better.
I also love how you write Makoto. She is strong, protective with her own insecurites, beautiful, loving and homey yet not and that is very true to her character from the anime and manga, you bring it in to your story with different situations and circumstances here and there and that's the beauty of fanfiction c: I love how well you write everyone.
| Realms of Destiny chapter 21 . 5/10/2012
I had to slap myself to make sure i wasnt imagining an update of this story in my mail! Wow...just wow. My words cant explain your beautiful, indepth writing. I loved how you focused on the bro/sis bonds in this chapter. Loved mako and heero and the ami and quatre scene wad so heartwarming. Hope to see trowa and michiru in the next chapter!
| l-annethunder chapter 21 . 5/10/2012
That was awesome. It's nice to see Mako-chan and Ami making progress, intentional or not. As for Setsuna & Duo it's nice to see them interact. You can see why he's good for her AND Taru-chan, they need someone who can make them smile, as both have such heavy burdens to carry. I can't say enough good things about this one so I'm going to shut-up now. Looking forward to your next update kudos and das woot!
| MegaKat chapter 21 . 5/10/2012
Argh! Update, woman! And can we make with the smootchie smootchies soon? Ahem... especially Wufei and Ami. Don't know why I like that couple so much, I've never been a huge W/A other than in my own fic. I'll take ANY kissing at this point, though, lol. :D Great chapter!
| MegaKat chapter 7 . 5/9/2012
*DIES* Omg, not only the bad gay-bestiality porn line, but Duo popping his hand in the air, yelling, "I WANT IT!" Woke the kids up again... think it's time i hit the hay.
| MegaKat chapter 4 . 5/9/2012
OMFG. Seriously, Topaz, I haven't laughed THIS fucking hard in years! I woke the kids up! I could totally see the boys, all bare assed naked, chasing the girls like they were in some hentai flick gone HORRIBLY wrong! THANK YOU for making me laugh, this chapter was AWESOME!
| JPandS chapter 21 . 5/9/2012
That, was a great update!
Firstly, can I just say that I simply adore Duo as Setsuna's brother! Its just baffling how great a set of siblings these guys are. They balance off each other so well! And Makoto and Heero! I was so happy to see the memories starting to come back to Makoto and I am such a heap of warm and fuzzies because their relationship with each other is so adorable. Plus, Makoto's playfulness with him about Rei was hilarious ;) Those two also make a great pair of siblings. Actually, all the siblings are awesome with each other.
Ami and Quatre's scene is probably my most favorite of this chapter. It is so interesting to see these two together as siblings since they are so alike. They are also both very sweet of which I have a super soft spot for. But, geez I was so depressed when Quatre was telling Ami about how he had killed himself. It is certainly in his character to do something like that and especially with the reasons given, I was just heart broken as can only happen when dear, precious Quatre is involved!
Nevertheless, it was extremely comforting to have Ami so strong and reminding him that she was there fpr him even when being overcome by memories. I loved that ending.
Lastly, Haruka and Michiru are here! I cannot wait until they get inside! There's sure to be many interesting findings when that happens ;)
Alas, I am once more pressed for time and though I'd like to point out every single aspect of this update that I love, I can't because there are just too many XD Let it suffice to say that I love this chapter completely and I cannot wait to read more!