|Reviews for Knight Errant|
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/12
Everything is better with a BOLO. Everything. No exceptions. At all.
| thebluninja chapter 5 . 2/26
"the peoples of Earth stud united " - *stood (though I bet the fangirls call him a stud)
"A new for of weapon, only made possible by the great strives that had been made in material science " - *form, *strides
So ... Mass Effect Bolo? :)
| thebluninja chapter 4 . 2/26
"of a warrior who's willpower and courage " - *whose
Actually, so far this is my least favorite. I think it needs more Batman.
| thebluninja chapter 3 . 2/26
"I can no longer sence my bothers or the main base core." *Brothers (although they are often quite bothersome.)
"the fact remains that my commander has to returned." - *not
"Not close enough for me to follow any order their might give me blindly," - either *they, or you accidentally a word.
... Jedi Bolo?
| thebluninja chapter 2 . 2/26
"so it had been necessary to send a ship on head." - *ahead
"He had contemplated raising the entire base to the ground from orbit" - Unless he's increasing the elevation, it's *razing
"but it had slaughter the formidable Kull with ease," - *slaughtered
"My new Commander, General O'Neill, had decided that you may call me simply Ash, and has instructed me to introduce you to what he calls my 'boom stick'." - :D (But since when did a Bolo come with verbal inhibitors?)
| thebluninja chapter 1 . 2/26
"None who stood before it lived to tell the tail" - *tale
Bolo giant eagle. (And why the f*** Gandalf didn't just fly them there in the first place still escapes me.)
| Independent Dude chapter 4 . 2/18
Good idea! Bolos were created to fight the Kaiju!
| GaredBattlespike chapter 5 . 1/30
I have stumbled upon your excellent works here, and applaud, most heartily! Bravo! More, please!
| knightphoenix2 chapter 5 . 1/29
Can we get an expanded chapter here, please?
| OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 1/29
| F-14 Tomcat Lover chapter 5 . 1/29
Did NOT see this one coming.
Should have, but didn't.
A few spelling and grammar mistakes. Got to watch out with transferring the docs for final publishing. The servers tend to have a translation issue out of left field.
| Illuviar chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
LOL!That was dun :D
| Qoheleth chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I wonder what the Ents thought about that.
| KleverKilva chapter 3 . 11/13/2012
Would love to see how this could continue onward, bolo on a sled ftw?
| mark3232 chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
A Bolo isn't the kind of thing that would be a Green Lantern. For God's sake, there's a Doctor Who/Green Lantern crossover fic about a DALEK becoming a GL...