Reviews for A New Frontier
ANGELiCAWROTE chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
aw, I love this chapter.. but you could've brought more depth into the emotions that Bella and Edward were feeling...

Maybe stick with one POV for a chapter... it let's your character's grow as the story progress
OliviaJane chapter 2 . 9/30/2008
Yay! Bella's going to meet Edward. Everyone do the Alice bounce. Now I sit on pins and needles until the actual meeting. lol
OliviaJane chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
I really like this. Very sweet. LOL, bull named Emmett - how fitting. :)
simkid chapter 3 . 9/30/2008
This really reminds me of 'Shanghi Noon' even tho its nothing like this... hehe I love it I LIVE IN NEVADA! at least its a dry heat place...
zombiekon chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
luv it! update soon! :D
SeekingJamestown chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Aw, that was cute. I liked it. And I'm glad that he didn't seem to be too mad at her for lying.
MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
AH! I love this story!

When I was reading the original one-shot, I thought it would be lovely if you could make a whole story out of it, and you're doing it!

YES!

I can't wait for more!

(Also, naming the animals Alice, Jasper, Emmett and Rose? GENIUS!)
knblas chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
It was even better the second time around!
MyBlackRoses chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
So when I checked my email before going to bed I saw the alert for this story. You had already posted one that I knew about earlier today so my first thought was 'I love you', aimed at you of course. Then I thought it'd be kinda of creepy if you knew my first thought but then I decided I'd tell you anyway and now I'm writing this. Now before you go to get a restraining order on me, I promise I'm not going to become some weird stalker lady. I'm a little out of it from all the coffee and lack of sleep lately.

So, if I freaked you out, I'm sorry...

MyBlackRoses
Mahjinx chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
Once Again Truly Brilliant :)
Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story,, it is soo original. Kinda weird with the animals named after the other characters but it is a really good story line. Cant wait to read more!
lifesadance2004 chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
sweet chapter! I love cowboy edward! update soon por favor!
christinemarie13 chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
I just love this story completely. It gets better with each chapter. And I wanted to cry with Bella's words near the end. It's just so sad that she couldn't save herself for Edward. I have read this chapter before, but it was just as great the second time around.

I can't wait for more! :)
ThisIsAnUnimaginativePenName chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
I think it's sweet
Hhiillaarryy chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
OME!

i love this story!

post! hurry!
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