Reviews for Runaway
Rescued-Doll chapter 10 . 7/31/2015
I loved the part of the drawing hahahah really! that everything is more cheerful and bright! Tomorrow I'll read the rest love your story so much!
Rescued-Doll chapter 9 . 7/31/2015
hehehe I liked them too uuh why have Namine to be so youngg? haha shes only 15! how old is Axel? xD if anything else happens between them he just will have to be veryyy patient haha i like it xD nice chapter
Rescued-Doll chapter 8 . 7/31/2015
uuh he liked roxas in a special way...? i'm confused xd I dont like twilght haha I understand axel was sleeping xD I think they need to stop thinking that they have to be apart forever xD even if namine finds another place to stay (I hope she doesnt heheh) they still could be friends, right? I think they need to think like that but I understand the way they feel, like they stuck together for a "forced situation" and Axel thinks she doesn't want to stay with him, and Namine thinks she woud be a burden for him and thinks Axel wouldn't want her to stay. But deep down namine wants someone who cares about her and Axel wants someone to care about. Because both of them feel lonely, and sadness enough, that's what keep them together. But, they can fill the emptiness and find happiness if they are together right? I really like how you bring to life those feelings, it's so sweet. And the best thing of it is that it is what they feel in the orininal videogame, just in another lind of sory, and that another reason why I'm liking this fic so much! (even if in the end they are not in love hehe) thanks for share this with all of us!
PS. I wish you don't be scared when you found all the reviews I posted in here xD I just feel like I want to write them , and I also think you and this story deserves it.
Rescued-Doll chapter 7 . 7/31/2015
not a stranger anymore 3 this story is very sweet really! I wish it was a love story in the end!
Rescued-Doll chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
awwwww hehehe im really happy with the storyy! i'll keep reading right know! cant wait to see axel's reactionn
Rescued-Doll chapter 5 . 7/31/2015
uuh they need to tell each other why Namine should stay with him! at least untill she finds a job!
Rescued-Doll chapter 4 . 7/31/2015
Axeeeel just tell her if she wants to stay with youu alreadyy haahah poor Namineee! I'm really liking this story I don't know if it is a love story, but I really hope so :D
Rescued-Doll chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
oh god... once I had a very similar dream _ it was horrible and I woke up in sweat as well... it was long time ago though.. And Axel, how nice. I want an Axel too xD hahaha I loved that chapter too!
Rescued-Doll chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
I like the point of view of axel really like it!
Rescued-Doll chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
OMG I loved it! I love those two too! I've been reading a lot in here for years and I can't believe I've never noticed this fic! I really like the start
rouge123 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
nice start you really captured axels personality in this one
p.s. sorry for my spelling :)
Snickerdoodle-sensei chapter 15 . 1/11/2013
This is is literally the 3rd time I have read this story and I am just now reviewing. Unless I've reviewed before and forgot :P Regardless, I enjoy this stort quite a bit, hence the multiple reads. While there is a minor realism issue, that issue doesn't really matter because hey, this is fanfiction. Also the story itself and the use of characters are quite good. I love the whole Axel and other members of Org. XIII as mechanics. You also have a gift for describing places, kudos. Well I enjoy this story and it's going to my favs, that is all.
That Faggot From Next door chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
Wow, this was to beautiful not to review. I really liked this chapter for some reason and YES! IM YOUR 100TH REVIEWER! AGAIN! D
That Faggot From Next door chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
This is good. But some words need some fixing. other than that, it seems really promising.
That Faggot From Next door chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Seems good! I cant wait to move onto the next chapter
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