|Reviews for Daddy's Girl|
| Rhea Silverkeys chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Hi! Sorry it's taken a very long time, but I'm finally reading the entries for the contest. Also, completely unrelated, but I have noticed the new limit on characters for the reviews. I think that is stupid. (
That was quite...different. I was rather disturbed by Reina discovering her father was a nymphomaniac, but was quite amused at the end. I do wonder how her mother decided to marry him. It was a nice touch that he was cured of his nymphomaniacy (I know, that's not a word) by her birth. I don't know how everyone thought it would be passed down genetically, though! Unless it actually is...?
Anyway, nicely written piece. It flowed very well. Also, very nice use of the theme! )
| NathanKwiu130 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
This is good i like the way that you have it set up i think that its funny too
| rachelprue chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
I really love this story, because it's different than a lot of stuff you see in the FG genre. But it still makes FG sense.
Plus there's great punctuation... you must have an awesome beta!
| Iron-Mantis chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Funny stuff, hah looks like Reina developed quagmire favorite word.