Reviews for Breach
Eerie Iri chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Beautifully hilarious with a nicely dramatic touch!
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Funny! I like it.
Silveriss chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Oh. This was fun. I really loved the character interaction here. I found both characters spot on and believable. Wonderful job.
Truth of Barricade chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
*grin* Oh. I so liked this story.

Nice work. I love the interactions.

*giggle*
Bluebird Soaring chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Very interesting twist on the Red Alert suspects everybody theme...and I like how you write Smokescreen - He's not a safe mech, but even Red has to admit he has his uses )
cmdrtekk chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Fun story. Entertaining and well paced. Interaction between the characters was pretty well done also.
flamingmarsh chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
this was good )