Reviews for Hitomi's Letter
shinen77 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Gosh. I almost cried. Beautiful yet heartbreaking. Thank you for writing such story.
fluffball26 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This reminded me of V for Vendetta. Very nicely done. I never review stories, but this one really brought me (close) to tears. :)

Good for you, and good writing style. It would've been interesting to know how they knew about Gaea and that Hitomi had been there, though. Just a thought that it could be interesting to write another chapter from Hitomi's perspective before she died. I think you could do it. :)
Cloudancer chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
oh, god. i cried.
The Black Sheep Juri chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
wow ... that was a little morbid and very sad and kinda sweet... and deffinately different ...
MadamWriterGal chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
OMG That has to be one of the saddest things I have ever read in my life! The end made me cry! It was a very good story but I wanted more of it. I think that this has the potential of being a chapter story with maybe Hitomi showing up at the end. *Grins hopefully.* I wanted to know more about why people were trying to get to Gaea; the story really kept me in suspense! Anyway, this is very good. I am adding it to my favorites.
artszy chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
If i ever thought that you are cute then i take it back.u not only made me cry u killed hitomi exams are coming and how am i going to do well if all of you start writing sad me i cried a lot before it was a nice well written please don't write sad stories ...
AmethystWings chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
that was sad, but very well written
InsanelyinlovewithWilliam chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
You said it was a genre you were not comfortable with, but it was very good for your first attempt. There is room for improvement, but when isn't there any?Go on writing, and you'll get even better.

IILWW
InLuvWidVan chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Aww...*sniff sniff* that was so sad...

I almost cried reading it...Poor Van...Poor Tomi...of all da tortures she n her family bore...although u wrote it brilliantly plz dont b so cruel to dem next tym...

Still luv ur fics...

Peace...
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
-sobs brokenly- Oh poor Van... I can't believe Hitomi's dead.
mysisterisasquijum chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
awe. that was really really good. i actually got teary-eyed.

keep up the good work,

~mysisterisasquijum
Silvercrystal.ct chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Well writen.

The letter was Excelent for getting it's point across.

It's not something most fans of the show like to see but for what it 'is' it is good.

as said by 'thepink' it lacked a little on the emotional side for Van & co. reactions but over all a great first try.
thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
This one shot is pretty much ok. I think you're more of those writers who are more comfortable with writing happy stories. Just kinda lacks the emotion of sadness but overall this was pretty good for a first try!
La Dormeuse chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Ok I am actually crying, it's not PMS. Seriously!

You killed her! Gah!

Amazing piece, I'll never read it again as it's so sad and painful but gah! What caused you to write this? It's so gloomy.

Let's pray that nothing like that ever happens to this planet.

Sina xx