This could turn into something I think.

Interesting.

I want you to write more, I demand it!

Please? *Puppy dog pout*

Confusing... Should make longer though.

Seems like you ended with a statement that needs more to follow to tie up the storylines. Like how you have brought the current characters into the storyline with Claire's return.

PLEASE WRITE MORE! need i say more...

This could go so many ways and make a great chapter story!

-xox-

Hey

OMG you can not leave it like this it's an awesome story please go on writing !

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me Already the biggest fan on earth