|Reviews for The Digital World|
| cherrrysakura chapter 5 . 2/25/2011
Eeeeeeeeekkkkk! Cliffhanger! I am so hooked! Gee if the dogital work was a game that would be awsome! Also I am guessing that hikairi and byo are like supposed to represent the season 1 digikids.
| MingHuan chapter 5 . 10/30/2009
This is an amazing story you wrote! I love how the characters are in character how you portrayed and set them up through out the story. Keep it up with this work, it's really awesome!
| sweet.summer.rain chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I really like this story! The whole world-as-a-videogame concept is pretty cool, and I like how you gave the game "legends", it reminds me of some real roleplaying legends.
Gennai Inc. made me laugh. I kept picturing a whole building full of Gennai doubles running around monitoring the game.
Thank you! Please update!
| 9tail-Naruto chapter 5 . 7/3/2009
A very interesting story! You don't see too many stories staring Kouichi, even fewer stories that are AU's (that are not Highschool Fics) Although there are OC's strangly it's not bothering me at all. I hope that you'll update soon
| QueenofDarkRoses chapter 5 . 4/23/2009
I just love this story!
| Final Genesis chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
It's a wonder what sort of events causes a plot to thicken like this - hoo boy!
This is Final Genesis, signing out!
| Kayland Elric chapter 5 . 4/20/2009
this story is awsome please update it soon when you get the chance :D
| caedi chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
Really loving it so far. I'm a big fan of .hack (although I haven't watched it for a few years) and digimon, so I'm definitely interested to see where you take this. Have to say I'm not the biggest Izuichi fan- but love how you've described their friendship so far, as well as Kouich meeting everyone in the digital world, Kouji and Kouichi, Takuya and Kouichi, that wierd email Kouichi got- it's all so intriguing! (and I'm definitely interested in Takuya and Kouji's relationship, since I can see by your favourites you're a Takouji fan, too)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon
| Evide chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
Hah! I just noticed you had Takuya sneeze when that other player was thinking about him. Haha. It's Japenese beliefe that when you sneeze someone is talking about you. xD I like it.
And the mystery player has a puppy! Puppy! _
And you're right - it was a shift from pov. Very good - well executed.
Can't wait for the next chapter! _
| Kendogarurugrl5000 chapter 4 . 2/24/2009
That was awsome
| Final Genesis chapter 4 . 2/24/2009
Interesting on how Flare meet Tomoki/Kuma! And quite the touching scene with Lobo and Lowe too!
This is Final Genesis, signing out!
| Gemini Star01 chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
Ah...This is so cool! _ I love how you've managed to work all of these characters from the other seasons in here, and the personalites are all perfect! Plus, the story has a nice pacing and you really get to know what's going on with Kouichi - it's fantasic. Keep it up, I'm really enjoying this, and I'll look forward to your next update! _
| Ao Kudo chapter 3 . 1/18/2009
PLEASE CONTINUE! I just LOVE IT! i wish i was in it...
| Evide chapter 3 . 1/17/2009
I love the way you added the time information and some of those extra bits! And especially the "you'll burn the house down" comment. It gives character and was very funny! :D
Okay I know Zero is Taichi but then... is Flare Takuya or Daisuke? xD or maybe Masaru! but then if Lobo is Kouji then who in the world is Litch? Very interesting. And I'm looking forward to how all the characters in the game will end up together on this "adventure" that is coming. And then how will Kouichi manage to figure out who plays who?
_ very good! can't wait for the next one! ;)
| Sakura no Umi chapter 3 . 1/16/2009
I love how the digimon characters from other season are popping in the story. I also like the comment of how if Daisuke was there it would have been a three-way brawl.
Yes! Even the original Yagami Taichi makes it in here. This is A-MAZ-ING.
hmm who do I think tried to punch Kouichi. Going iwht the trend it obviously a digidestine. The only people who would beat someone up for bumping into them would be Ruki or Masaru and maybe Kouji depending on if it was pre Digworld adventure. I've already ruled him out though cause he obviously Lobo. I can't imagine Ruki taking a guy avatar so that would leave Masaru. Kouichi also mentioned that the voice was familiar hence Masaru. It could be Takuya by description and by knowing the voice, but I decided that he is Flare. So I'm going to have to go with Masaru in the Digital World with his fists. That's my final answer and yes I'm sure.
Amazing chapter. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update, but as an author I do understand that we can't churn out chapters at incredible speeds. (I wish)
If you ever get real stuck feel free to bounce idea's off of me. I have my fair share of Digimon and .Hack knowledge. This is just too good of a fic to see fall into the evil clutches of writer's block. Especially the writer's block of no return (trust me on this one. It actually happened to one of my fics and it was mainly my fault.)
-Sakura no Umi
Also one minor thing. You put Touma was from Australia which I'm positive is wrong. I want to say he from Austria but I'm not positive on that.