Reviews for Unfair
MissyStells chapter 1 . 7/12/2019
BooksAreForLife chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
I wished that Remus had survived just as Serius did but then I realized the ending wouldn't have been as satisfying. This little ficlet helped with the loss of Remus so thank you. You wrote another amazing story (albeit small) but this was more than enough!
4everfictional chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
So cute! I love it even though he...and now this is so much more bitter sweet when you think about it...
awaylaughingonafastcamel chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
loved it :D
werewolfsfan chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I enjoyed your writing and your characterizations are good. Unfortunately, this doesn't entirely work as a stand alone one shot. I guess I'll just have to put "The Reader" on my LONG to read list!
testosterone-tea chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Nice characterization of Kara. You did a pretty good job considering it was a one-shot. Also, your spelling and grammar is good. The story flows and transitions quite well. Keep writing!