Reviews for Epligoue: A Burning Ending
ILoveMormonBoys chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Ooh, I liked that a lot! :) I would have read/reviewed this sooner, but we just read the book in English... So yeah. I liked it a lot, you did a great job with it! :)
NicoleCullen91 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
I personally liked it. We just finished reading this in English and I must say, it's nice to have closure. The whole bombing thing was a little too, i need to end this, but i loved the description and writing, it was very well done.
iLaurenNicole chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
haha we wrote this together and its deffinately AMAZING!
DustyDreamer chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Wow that was very good. You're a very lovely writer -i'll definately look out for some more of your stories :)
tenkuchima chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
To be honest it wasnt very good. It seemed kinda like you were trying to cram as much long vocab words in there as you could, and it doesnt sound very natural. Its also highly unlikely that a) jack would kill the naval officer.

or b) someone would want to bomb a random island in the middle of nowhere, theres no point to it.