Reviews for Bite My Lip
Eusebius chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Oh! Vamp!Fred rocks! The Twilight intro is hilarious, and I thought Fred was really in character in a dark, vampiric sort of way. Poor George, though.
Lioness2012 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
absolutlay love it! please update soon, and don't worry about coping twilight. this is a good!
mandi chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
i really like what i've seen of this story! i really hope that you can update really soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!
Jack of the North chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I caught between hysterical laughter of excitement and bawling my eyes out. It was so good. I'd forgotten how good you are. You are good. lol

The characters were good and it was a great first chapter; explained what was going on but kept it moving. I love first chapters, I'm obsessed but anyway...

I love your 'twlight' intro, I was giggling like a two-year old and nearly woke MY two-year old.

I feel truly honoured that you wrote this for my birthday, I could not ask for more. Oh wait yes I can...

Another chapter please!
oceanwaters2006 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Ah Cliffy! Must you be so cruel?

But, on a lighter note, LOVED IT! I love Twilight and Harry Potter and although yours is different from Twilight I do like haveing the whole vampire thing in the Harry Potter world!

Excellent job!

Can't wait to read more!

And of course you can't go wrong with Fred and Hermione!
Dramione-Fan 17 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
amazing more please
mandigrrl chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
seems like a promising start. will watch for updates!
Eliche chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Very interesting im looking forward to more
Kikuchi chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
XD oh lordy, this is going to be interesting. in a good way, of course. in a fantastic way, most definitely. how could it not be? 8D
x-writingfreak-x chapter 1 . 9/23/2008


StardustSpike chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
very impressive writing, story has diffantly got me in cant wait to read more
kayko15 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008

Fred: What?

Me: ...

Fred: So I'm not dead, you've found a way around all that. I like that fact.

Me: Not dead, Fred... dang! Cliffy! I love it! ... you are updating soon right?

Fred: Duh...

Me: Shush, you're not the author! Oh my gosh! I'm absolutely in love with this story. At first I thought it was going to be something stupid... but it turns out that it's not... I like it! Very original. :D I can't wait to see what happens next! You better update soon. I'll be looking forward to this. Keep up the good work, no pressure. Later. K15
Miss. Silver Star chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Strange, yet intriguing.
Rose chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
this has captured my fred a vampire? that would be neato..lmao...i love the suspense at the end of this chapter. more more more, please!
supernaturalmuse chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Freakin' Awesome!

That's all I gotta say. ;D
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