Reviews for Looming Darkness Chronicles: Book One
bostafu chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Hm... is there like a hidden meaning with Naruto looking at himself in the mirror and noticing how he's slightly different?
bostafu chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
wow.. he has to learn all about magic first and learn how to make a port key before going back home... that feels like its gonna take a long time if he has to go through school first. But then again.. Naruto might be a fast learner XD
VampireGaaraCheesepuffs chapter 5 . 10/2/2008
MUCH slower (JUU! .)

Can't wait til they head to hogwarts, update soon!


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pyro357 chapter 5 . 10/1/2008
update soon
goddessofsorrow chapter 5 . 10/1/2008
cool. make Naruto learn a few more languages before going to school that way he would be able to talk to the other school students and learn form them. update soon
goddessofsorrow chapter 2 . 9/30/2008
love the story;) update soon
VampireGaaraCheesepuffs chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
Kazuko (sp?) Had 5 hearts by the way .

I think the story's goin preety well, but try not to rush through it so much, I think it's goin a little too fast .


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