Oh ny goodness. Wow. I'm just at a loss of words for how beautifully written and crafted this story is. I laughed and I cried. Never ever have I cried at a fic before but this was so profoundly touch and moving and so eloquent it just touched me in a way I never felt before this story was truly remarkable and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I can't wait to read more of your work and any possible sequel. Your OCs came alive for me and I was so moved by their plight and story. Not to mention my two favourite elves being involved as well (please tell me Ivoreth and Elrohir make up in the end?) Very well done to you on this incredible piece. I loved, loved, loved it!

An original idea, and it's, at the end, a marvelous story. I cried when her poor brother died... Hard world, and King Elessar will have to work hard to avoid children to die like this.

It also shows how much the Elves love children... them, who can't have babies anymore.

Really well done. :)

I loved it!
I went through it all in one sitting. I cried when Daren died - I kept thinking it just has to be mistaken identity! I hope that Ivoreth will fully heal and that Elrohir will forgive her!
Now should I sleep or look for Elladaniel?
Thanks again!
U.P.

Thank you for this uplifting tale.
Borys

Your Twins are very, very different from mine.
Borys

A lookout s still a thief.
Borys

Sweet...Poignant... Beautiful... Thank you for such a well-written story that had its bittersweet moments...Well done...

What an endearing and emotional story. Elrohir needs to get off his high horse, seriously. The child has been through so much.

I was just going to ask wil there be a sequel.
Excellent story, showing the lives of the Gondorians not fortunate enough to find a happy home after the war.
I think Elrohir is going to taken hard work to bring back to his old self, but I trust your character, and you, that you'll make it happen

this was different but very good. so good in fact at the end i went straight to your profile page and saw your avatar. i of curse had seen it already but found my self seeing spike looking like an elf highly amusing. brought tears to my eyes.

you have a way of writing that is brilliant. Every chapter I read, I have to go back and read it again, there are a great many published books in the world that wouldn't temp me so, but your word are too enticing. I thank you for having written this so well and despite my only comment being on missing commas, that is all I can complain about. I know its along time since this was published but great writing endears. Happy writing my friend.

This is beautiful ;) I can't stop reading!

~Ea

A very compelling story. It was an emotional read for me, I wept through many chapters. Very well written :) Now I go off to read the sequel :)

Nice story.

Poor little Daren! Why did you kill him?