Reviews for Fast Times at Forks High
Jasline Devereaux chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
This was nasty, grimy, gritty, and fuck-filled.

I loved it! lol

Not bad at all for your very first lemon.

Edward tore that ass up!
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
lol when Edward seduces, he SEDUCES..lol

so they did get together right?
XxooTwILigHt xXx ObSSesSeDooxX chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
u shud do more stuff with the one actually likes the cock in bella's clit or center. ive had sex b4 & i'll describe it 2 u l8er. and i am much older than u
Hyper Puck chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
AWESOME!
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Wow. Super awesome!
ConfusionPixie chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
wow that was intense. but it was good! i hope you win! good luck!
writergirl135 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
yay! i love it! the idea of a seducing edward is delicious!
I'mAnAllStar chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
O nice lemon, first one really? Well... that was really well done, i liked it alot!
Lilith Sweet chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
you did a good job. keep it up!
KayRad816 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
wow...that was really good. you should continue this into a story...lol. that would be cool.
Bronzehairedfreak1901 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Hahahahaha. Love the title and CD! I went to their concert back in October and it was fucking awesome! hahah william had this unexplainable bulge in his pants the entire time! Hmm...We The Kings maybe! Tehehhe..I have a naughty mind. :)
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
i loved this ! lol
IcelandGirl812 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Haha! I love the title!

This was good. I've read things by people who have ten or more stories and they're not even close to being this good. In all honesty, I wouldn't mind a sequel or something...One thing I did notice though was two paragraph breaks instead of one in some places, sometimes in the middle of a word too. It's not a big deal though. Just something I noticed. Nowhere near as annoying as grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors. Which I'm very happy to say I didn't really even notice one here. )
Oh Nathalie chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
hahaha!I think it will make it. lol! that was funni!

i mean it was long. but that's good. cause it told us some other details for us to understand more about the one-shot.

So great job on that!
Craving2Read chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Wow. Loved it. Really hot.
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