|Reviews for Judgement|
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Awesome first chapter Michaela, you have certainly blown your writers block right out of the water!
As usual you have their conversation and banter so in character, and there are so many great lines!
Sam gave him an incredulous look. “Right, cos that’s the bit that bothers you most. Not that you nearly died, but that you accidentally ate tofu.”
“What do you think?” he said quietly and Dean looked sideways at him.
“You really want me to answer that?”
“Alright, don’t get excited. I think the place is like something out of a hammer horror film and that guy in there is creepy as hell. Satisfied?”
Sam winced. “Could you maybe not use that word while we’re here?”
You just write so inside their heads it is a joy to read and so like an actual episode!
That priest sounds a might creepy, not the sort of guy you would expect running a religious retreat, and what's with the hidden camera? Something definitely seems to be going on there - something for the Winchester's to investigate! Sam is right, it is their thing!
Loved too how Dean did his best to get out of the hunt after the last one at a retreat, and how Sam did his best to get Dean to agree! And great that both of them knew the other ones argument!
Dean could hear the line coming a mile away and knew Sam was pulling out all the stops to manipulate him, but he answered anyway. He was curious which angle his brother was gonna go for this time. “Wrong about what?”
“About what we do. I thought it was about saving people, I never realised we had to check out their religious beliefs beforehand.”
Dean smirked. “Nice try, Sam, but a little predictable don’t you think? Going for the whole ‘it’s about saving people’ angle - I seem to recall you’ve used your quota on that one this year already.”
Sam inwardly cursed but outwardly pretended to ignore the jibe. It was kind of irritating sometimes, trying to get something past someone who knew you so well. “Whatever. I was being serious. But if you’re so convinced this is nothing then I could go check it out myself. Save you from the chanting monks.”
That got him a sharp look. “Oh, so you’re skipping the others and moving straight to that one, eh? Well the answer’s still no. We don’t hunt alone, you know that.”
And so funny the image of the boys walking around 'packing' unable to leave the weapons in their small unlocked rooms!
Fab start hon, loving it already!