|Reviews for More than friends|
| Meowmeow chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
That was fantastic :O I wish you can make a fanfict about them in there marriage time if you can only consider doing one XDDD
| Shubhs chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
the last part was so totally not like azuma but otherwise it was ok...
| Blanco chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
That was so sweet, I would love a sequel!
| Kuryu chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Yes..! The world needs more YunokixHino fics!
| naomiyuraki08 chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
This story is nice. Hope i can read more HinoxYunoki stories from you. )
| White Melancholy chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I LOVE IT! I haven't read a Yunoki x Hino fanfic in AGES! Oh my god, I'm getting crazy... Well, I have some suggestions for you. You should have inserted more characteristics of the evil Yunoki. Like in these parts, you should have used 'Kahoko' instead of 'Hino' (since at that moment they're alone, and mostly at those moments Yunoki calls her Kahoko):
“Did you like that, Hino…?” Yunoki asked with humor in his eyes.
“Simple…it’s because I love you, Hino” Yunoki said...
And another thing. Most of the time Yunoki does not tell someone, especially Hino, how he feels straightaway. I think he likes to make her think about the hints he gave. But in this case it's actually okay, it's your choice anyway, whether to make him really in character or not.
Well, overall, good story... I love it!