Reviews for Peripheral Vision
sydrian chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
this is a great fic and it would be rather flipping brilliant if you could continue... love the whole jack scene too.
linkkinparkk chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
I loved your story and the characters you bought to life. I thought it was a really good take on the 'companion left behind' thing Doctor Who has going on. It's nice to think Jack looks out for his past friends!

Great story!

Lon Sarver chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Nicely done. Your characterization of Shari makes me curious about her time with the Doctor and Jack, without making that mystery overshadow what's going on in this fic.
cjh4ever chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
What a lovely start to what I hope will be a longer story. I like the idea of Jack looking after the companions left behind. Seems true to his character. Keep writing.