|Reviews for Christine|
| Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Ah, Mura-ken and Banana Man! I'm pleased to see you actually wrote this scene, but envious you had the time.
It went pretty much the way I had imagined it. Just enouh interaction to give a clear picture, but not enough for it to grow tedious or morph out of character. I think you got the personalities perfectly. xD The shooting down of Epyon was brillient. Was it a Wing Zero suit he had? It might just have been Wing. No, I'm pretty sure it was Zero. But that's a very minor detail.
| mystakenidentity chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I would imagin Jose to be nervous
really nice job ..