Reviews for Emerald Twilight
Loveless150050 chapter 1 . 1h ago
Are you going to be making a sequel? Just skip new moon unless you are adding Bella to it cause I'd hate to see Harry and Edward split.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/11
Sometimes I think this whole fanfiction is a troll, purposely meant to follow all rules that make writing filthy crap.
This shit is so ridiculous it doesn't seem true. This is a joke right? NOBODY can write such shit if they're trying even remotely. NOBODY.
Dear author, no offense, but you need to grow the fuck up.
Observer chapter 6 . 2/11
Fanfiction has never seemed so apparent that it has been written by a fan.
Your writing is childish and immature. Harry Potter has no character development, is shallow and is honestly, quite mean-more so than the mean girls Hermione and Cho. Edward is fucking stupid.
Frankly, this piece of writing of yours is the worst. The others I quite liked.
Why do you have to purposely go and make your main protagonist so unlikable and revolting?
I wouldn't be friends with 'this' Harry Potter if someone paid me.
Overall, all I can say-
Stupid, shallow fan service.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/3
Thank God there is no Emerald Moon.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/2
I didn't think it was possible, but with every chapter I find myself hating Harry more and more. He's even worse than Bella - a feat I hadn't thought possible until this fanfiction! : )
thehereandnow33 chapter 24 . 12/31/2014
Where's emerald moon? :(
Hobble gobble chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Wow, I'm surprised at how well these two stories mesh together. You did a fantastic job. I'm excited to continue reading this.
tat5934 chapter 24 . 11/30/2014
Thank you for this amazing story!
tat5934 chapter 21 . 11/30/2014
Oh no! Fucking Riddle! Poor James...
tat5934 chapter 19 . 11/30/2014
I'm so happy for Neville and Jacob!
tat5934 chapter 15 . 11/30/2014
Wow! That was hot!
tat5934 chapter 14 . 11/29/2014
Oh no! Troubles in paradise!
tat5934 chapter 13 . 11/29/2014
This is one of my favorite chapters! I love that Edward is so possessive! It's so cute!
tat5934 chapter 11 . 11/29/2014
Aww! That's so sweet!
tat5934 chapter 8 . 11/29/2014
I loved! I loved that Harry is not at all like Bella! It makes your story even more interesting :-)
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