|Reviews for Otherworld|
| WildKhaine chapter 15 . 5/10/2020
Well, for the most part not a bad story. Too bad it stopped when things were getting a bit interesting. Kind of funny, author saying never be abandoned but no updates in over a decade. Oh well. It's always too bad when the decent stories get abandoned and so many rather crap ones get completed.
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/5/2019
I just found this story, thank you
| oxyd2013 chapter 15 . 3/12/2019
OK, I give up.
After 5 X-overs, a hundred cliffhangers, zillions of insignificant details about gun nomenclatures and pointless backstories. We know all about hair colors and fighting styles of tertiary characters... but along the way you forgot the STORY.
| JOHN0713 chapter 15 . 9/6/2018
Very good I hope you decide to finish this story in the future.
| jabbarulez chapter 13 . 7/29/2015
What about the first ones from b5? Will they be appearing?
| edboy4926 chapter 15 . 4/23/2015
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
This was strangely boring...
I only read about three paragraphs a chapter maximum...
Or merely scanned through.
| MyRandomName chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
| NightWithMoon chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
ok... since when do the premier weapons tech developers work in out of the way fringe colonies, and not nearer the center of human control? And if it was just 10 terabites of info on each cube and he had five hours to prepare why the fuck wasn't he long gone - that sort of info should have been first priority, not last...
Also prophetic dreams are the domain of fantasy not sci-fi... and finally we have a very good idea of earth's exact position in the galaxy and that's just with the tech of today... with a smart AI and future tech it should be downright easy to plot ones position relative to the galactic cor, and only slightly more difficult to figure out where earth is - especially with all the familiar features of our galaxy such a smart AI should know. Finally if there's a theoretical maximum in hyperspace, how the hell do you explain the ship being launched so far by the nuke - that was more than one hundred and twenty-five percent their past speeds...
All sorts of holes that make reading this a whole lot less satisfying and a whole lot more confusing.
| NightWithMoon chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
o.k. sorry but that just doesn't make sense. You have megalomaniac goa'uld who apparently encountered the wraith - longer liverd, stronger, psychicly powered. beings - and didn't immediately make hosts out of them?
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/22/2012
Great story will there ever be another update?
| Cieva chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Why would Anubis have supplied any upgrades to Ra's forces? Anubis was Ra's archenemy; if Ra didn't get killed in this timeline, Anubis wouldn't have returned.
| Cieva chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
It's a little late for this review, but; wouldn't the Ancient outpost in Antarctica have been discovered well before any potential outpost on Pluto? Even if the Stargate was never made to work, the outpost is just There.